All Comments on 'Black Sheep Ch. 02'

Is everyone having sex? Makes you want to pay more attention to the goings on. Probably missing alot of it. Love the light heartedness and humor of the story.

I like Susan. More please.

This was as well-written as Chapter 1, but tells us little about Damien and his incredibly dysfunctional family that we didn't already know. Granted, you've expanded the canvas on which you can play by introducing Wellesley Academy. I'll be interested to see how you weave this material throughout your story line.

Please continue this story. Your conservative male characters, Damien and Jake are a refreshing change of pace from the rest of the literotica crap

I love how you are fleshing out the characters!

Poor, poor Damien. The little lost lamb. Of course the only v the guy wants isn't throwing itself at him.

Between the predatory gaze behind her glasses and the "whimsically inventive sex" thoughts plainly showing on her face, I identified with the secretary. I also love the winks to classic porn stars with the character names. Off to chapter 3!