by ShadwNinjaX
This is hot
But there's cuckold themes in future chapters and succubus being a bit of a hypocrite.
The writer is a tiny small guy with a tiny pale small cock.
You can see his twisted feelings of inferiority and compensatory mind everywhere in the writing.
It's transparent as if he tries to show himself how ugly he id, writing it.
How funny
Does the idea of bleeding noses at a hot woman imitate the racial characteristics of Japanese ugly pervert tiny little cocks, who pretend to be innocent but inner dirty.
haha scum
Her I cum is the dumbest way to say I’m cumming that ever was thought of. Story ok so far. It has some interesting things going on. A sex scene with him saying here I cum every time he blows off is the worst. That is what kids playing games say. Completely takes the fire from the scene.
Story has a good start...enjoyed the read, lets see how long it takes to read the rest, thanks...
Needing some inspiration and came back to read some of my favourites
JC
Still want to read the story threel years after discovering it
Our best PMS reader of the manly crowd! Seriously, if you don't like it, give it a rest. You're going on a week of this, GG, it ain't healthy!
Why rescue the murderous demon? Stupid lame hero. The "demons" in this story seem to be as ridiculous as the hero.
Gorgeous plot, exhilirating story...could even be turned into paperback if u want to but where is chapter 14 man, the story just doesn't end like that right?
Nice. One of the greats (at least the start is) in my opinion.
I really loved it. Hope the rest gives me the same thrills and fun! :)
Though, really... The dude faints with a ridiculous manga-like nosebleed each time he sees her, then turns into a sex god in bed? pfff =P
My favorite succubus is based upon the inspiration I received from the hentai character Nailkaizer from Angel Blade. No joke! I had not even seen it and simply came across the picture of her face on one webpage and those intense green eyes just inspired her whole character to me. I have her pic on Literotica in my profile if you click on my name here if you want to see. =)
You've inspired me to begin writing again. Thank you, ShadwNinjaX. This series looks immensely promising.
Quote -" "Kendra's eyes opened wide as his long cock pushed past her crevix and into her womb."
Not only is that highly unlikely, but even just hitting the cervix would hurt like hell." - End Quote
Yes, that wouldn't happen in during human sex... but she's a succubus...and you never know, maybe with them, in this world, that's possible! :-)
However, I think a few women would agree with me when I say... hitting the cervix while fucking wouldn't hurt like hell... it feels fantastic!!!
Anyway - great story!!! Off to read the next chapter!!
"Kendra's eyes opened wide as his long cock pushed past her crevix and into her womb."
Not only is that highly unlikely, but even just hitting the cervix would hurt like hell.
It's otherwise pretty good. That's just one annoying thing I see all the time.
I started reading this in the hope of getting off, yet I had ended up enthralled by the story; so much so that my mind had drifted far, far away from my initial purpose. Damn you.
Us WoW guys really enjoy this stuff, and you do it so much better than their goblins & Kung Fu Panda's.
Hazaa! Since Greyarchive died on it's feet, I was worried I'd never get to read this sort of brilliance again.
Really, REALLY looking forward to the story continuing. Welcome back sir!
Very good story, looking forward to the next chapter. Sex scene could be a bit better though in my opinion
I really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to reading more.