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He whistled lowly and shook his head. The woman always had a temper, that Koas. If things went well, then that temper tantrum would seem small in comparison to those she will be having in the near future!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoI have to ask the anonymous commenter before me… If you stopped reading at chapter 2, why are you commenting on chapter 5?
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoDon’t see forced or rape tags any where. Story was good until then. Stopped reading at chapter 2. I won’t bash folks for what they like but don’t get it. Maybe cuz I don’t read the site to play with myself. Like seeing original stories from bright minds. That said the I have a 2 feet long cock and you will take it is a real let down. Bad stuff
lonewolfalphaover 8 years agoI hope that you keep up the intrige and the mystery about blaze I might be wrong but some thing tells me in the back of my mind like your younger sybling almost touching you and in that anoyying voice I am not touching you that he is not intierly human but he might be and just one of those few that were born to the sword
jkthekatover 8 years agoThis is an instant classic! Hope you never quit adding stories to Literotica!
Jack
superfeluously_ealmost 10 years agoThe anger of the females towards Blaze sometimes is hilarious!!!
cylinderlitover 11 years agoThey are soooooo long! Don't misunderstand I love content and these stories are amazing! It' just that literotica's only lets you comment once you get to the end of a chapter. I had several things I wished to say but they are all forgotten as I got wrapped up in the story.
Anonymousalmost 12 years ago...And to be in that lucky sonuvabitch's place; gods above, what I would be willing to give up to be him...
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoAnd I get to the end of the first page, and I realize... HOLY CRAP, IT'S 11 PAGES LONG.
kattoy120vover 12 years agoAnd I have enjoyed your story so far.... But you have to sleep in the wet spot now!!
Anonymousover 12 years agoGood luck with your attempt at writing professionally.
Just out of curiosity is English a second language for you? That really wasn't meant as a slam, just curious about some of the odd syntax.
Cheers.
