All Comments on 'Blind Faith Ch. 01'

by SylviSlafford

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goamz86goamz86over 13 years ago
Good Start

keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good story, but....

I would advice you not to use the phrase 'Dear Johnny' constantly. It gets repetitive and annoying.

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