by hotpup
he said that girl had green eyes, and i doubt this mattered to either him or the girl. you may have thrown that in for the readers, but i think it takes away from the premise of the story. oh well.
Nice story here pup. The detail and eroticism are present throughout. I was @full-mast for the majority of the story. Thank you for not chickening out on this one and just ending it after 1 fairly rapid encounter. This was excellent. You got a '5', which I *NEVER* give out, EVER. Fantastically written and imagined. You may even turn me into a 3sum guy, yet. Ha ha ; )