All Comments on 'Blinded by the Sight Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
20 year Sentence

and he serves 18 months? Why bother to put him in jail?

magmamanmagmamanover 18 years agoAuthor
Wrong Catagory

Oh, well. Hit submit the button and they are gone, way it is now.

This one was supposed to be non-erotic section.

Sorry for the shortage of dripping pussies and 14" cocks.

MGM

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
You can resubmit

You aren't going to get decent ratings if you leave it here

just as "edit" to the end of the title and explain that it needs to go into the other category- it'll be cool

anon606anon606over 13 years ago
BWAAAAHahahahahaha!

A Shakespearean tragedy ...

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 12 years ago
Ah yes all of those surprised by the ending raise your hands -

And bow your heads in shame ROFL -

Only surprised he made it back to Mexico with the 30K, I guess the ladies did not make up their minds to turn him for the reward til' the fun times began.

Nicely done though still a lot of fun to read - he pretty much got what he deserved of course -

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
Idiot

He didn't learn his lesson the first time. Crime doesn't pay. Neither does shacking up with two skanks who know you are a criminal.

HA Ha ha

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Good Read****

Thanks for sharing.

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Why criminals get caught. Duh, stupid!

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