by shadow_raider
i can not believe how great this story was i am lost for words to decribe it
unbelievable story.... Can't wait for your next one. keep the stories coming
What a beautiful ending for a fantastic saga. The world you created was beautiful. Thank You for sharing your talent with us.
just wanted to say that that was an awesome story and it kept me riveted to the end
i absolutly loved it i read the hole thing in one day, i couldnt stop i hope u will keep writing stories, ur a great writer
This was one of the best stories that I have read. I hope that the other stories are just as Great. Please keep writting just the way you are. It was a pleasure.
Your story was great....you have an amazing talent for writing stories!! Please keep up the writing as I would love to read more of the adventures of your story telling.
Just read ur whole story and gotta say i loved it i liked the ending to sad that she has to watch her family age and die (or are they immortal like her) but dieing is a part of life and love how u wrapped everything up
I was addicted to this story I thank you for sharingthis story with
Us I do hope u continue with writing
Just finished reading the entire series. I was completely captivated by the world that you created. Please don't ever stop writing because you have a wonderful gift.