by WarLordwrites
Your descriptions really make this world come alive. I can't wait for some hot sex with hot women.
As a volunteer editor, I notice that you have almost perfect grammar and spelling. I say almost because no one is perfect. The "hunter" bit was an interesting twist. The "hunter" being a "bounty hunter." Indeed, this is some great work.
You have an absolute gift. This tale, with it's detail, profoundly pushes me to increase my knowledge of weaponry, seldom-used terminology, and imagination. You draw me in. Thank you for this!
-bobo