All Comments on 'Blood and Iron Ch. 03'

by WarLordwrites

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bobosupremobobosupremoalmost 8 years ago
The more I read, the more I need this story.

You have an absolute gift. This tale, with it's detail, profoundly pushes me to increase my knowledge of weaponry, seldom-used terminology, and imagination. You draw me in. Thank you for this!

-bobo

blaster8blaster8about 17 years ago
Great Work

As a volunteer editor, I notice that you have almost perfect grammar and spelling. I say almost because no one is perfect. The "hunter" bit was an interesting twist. The "hunter" being a "bounty hunter." Indeed, this is some great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
good stuff

This series is pretty good. Please keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
more please

Your descriptions really make this world come alive. I can't wait for some hot sex with hot women.

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