by WarLordwrites
dont get me wrong i am enjoying this story the premise is great, but get on with it the segments are too short. as soon as you start its done , very fustrating thanks
Storyline is interesting, but, the segments are a little short.
You really know how to build little Clifhangers, don't you?
But please keep it going, it is certainly hinting at an incredible depth, and I'd certainly enjoy reading your explorations of that world.