by phoenixphair
I'm so glad to see a new chapter and such a long one too! Thank you! This chapter was all that I hoped for and more. It addressed my concerns with Nell and is starting to look into Sarah's possibilities for the future... I couldn't ask for more. Thanks again for writing. I hope the next isn't too far away!
keep this going its great and has so many good plot lines that just keep you engrossed
I thought for sure you were done and this would be just another unfinished story on this site but I am so elated that you're continuing on. I truly love this story! There's so much depth to it that you can't help but get into it. I hope to see more and soon!
yessss finally..i love this story and i enjoy reading it very much..i always check back to see if you have updated and you did..made my night:)..it would be even better if you gave us short stories like ana's induction while we wait for updates for this one but maybe i am asking for too much..again love all your stories.
Love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
I laugh and am worried and turned on by your story. Love Taylor and Ash. Kevin is my favorite. I have been waiting for him to get together with Sarah. I hope that continues. I think they belong together. I can't wait for you to update and no matter what you do, I know I will love it. Thank you so much for your hard work.
Thank you for a beautiful story. Eagerly awaiting your next installment.
-kitten
Great story, Lovin it. By far one of the best I've read on this site, the first one I've taken the time to comment on too. Keep up the great work.
I love this story...I can't wait for the next installment...
Please make it soon...lol
Have loved this story, your story & Elianna's are the best on the website. Please keep writing and post the next installment.
Again, excellent!
Bob King
Reading, PA
Was surprised that the series was still going, thought it was done. So got a great surprise when I went to re-read this story (one of my favorites!). I'll have to keep ckecking for more chapters. Always wondered about Nel, there was just something that didn't set right with me.
Whenever you can update, I will be waiting. It would make a lovely New Year's present... hint, hint, nudge ;) Thanks for writing!
OMG I thought it was going to be finished!!!!! ARRGGH!
This is amazing Pheonix, really amazing. Still can't wait to see what Sarah chooses!
In one way the ending of ch 11 was a bit anti-climatic.. more that the betrayal was over before you realized it, and how much Talera had the situation under control. I was half wondering if the eventual fight would be Talera and Sarah against an army, with Sarah kicking some ass as well.
really really good story though.
Is there anything else you've written available anywhere.. internet, book stores, anywhere?
Karlman
I just wish to offer my thanks for your stories. Your characters seem real not just the two dimensional fluff that I seem to find alot. The plot and its twists are wonderful and not remotely predictable. I hope you continue your work here, as well as anywhere else you decide. Thank you again you for such a lovely read.
Bainsidhe
Pls write more Ive been waiting for the next installment for a long time.
Had I seen this on the shelf I would have purchased it. Excellent story. Anticipating more...
The next installment of this story has got to be in my top 5 of the things I've looked forward to for a long time! I'm so eager to hear the rest! I've read the story through a good 3 times now and I'm in such anticipation for part 12.. I'm also very curious as to where you got your inspiration from and how long the full story will be? Or are you just playing it by ear? I eagerly await a reply, though I understand if time is an issue! Keep writing! Ur doing a great job! X
Were the hell is the rest of the story?
What happens next been waiting a while!!!!
just finished reading the part 1 thru part 11. loved it can't wait for more.
Thank you for writing these stories. I love this series!! There'll be more, right?? Please? I can't wait!!
cant wait for the net chapter to see what happens.
keep up the awesome writing.
Is this story going to continue??.... I just spent all afternoon enraptured by your story....but.... theres got to be more thats just not here yet!!...
Please tell me its coming or has already been published so i can keep reading this...
absolutly enthralling story!
.... and so all I can say to honor your gift is simply: "Thank You!" It's your universe... yada..yada...yada....Peeping Tom