All Comments on 'Blood Moon'

What a great first story. I thought the concept was great. I mean what a way for a Vamp to feed. You did a good job in your describing people, there actions and even location. I think you have a future as a writer, so get writing.

I enjoyed it, I want more, please...

While he was doing all this licking and eating, it would have been more erotic, I think, if he had gently rested the swollen head of his huge cock against her tight little anus, twitched several times while leaking his lubricating pre-cum into her opening, and then began to gently push the tip into her ass. After inserting his head and several inches, he let her ride, writhe, and wiggle, impaled on his massive shaft....