All Comments on 'Blow Jobs & Gardening Gloves'

Not really a beginning or ending. Good descriptions, but lacking.

Title says it all....btw, if you want to use "thru" while chatting, go for it. If you want to write a good story, quit using slang. It's "through", not thru.

The writing overall is pretty good, and does justice to a woman who really likes giving head. The best erotic writing in my opinion puts you "right there". Present tense. Reveries are ok for parts of the story but a really good erotic tale puts you in the middle of the action.

I loved the story! I have been looking for a woman for many years that loves giving blow jobs that much. I could really deal with that!!!

Keep up the good work!

Thanks for sharing that story with us!

Alison, Never mind pickiness of some readers. Your story was great and made me want you so much. A guy never forgets his first blow job but finding someone who loves giving head is always the best.

Alison, Never mind pickiness of some readers. Your story was great and made me want you so much. A guy never forgets his first blow job but finding someone who loves giving head is always the best.

What's not to like about this story? I liked it a lot. (Gardening and BJ's are two of my passions as well. LOL!)I'm going to go check out more of your stories. Take care and keep writing. ;D

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