All Comments on 'Blown Away'

by TE999

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MfkndragonMfkndragon12 months ago

It was wam bam and done there was no build the story was all over the place it was forced and you are in a need for a editor or a better editor

BahamaBahamaover 10 years ago
Damn

That was pretty good.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 12 years ago
Sex and intrigue

Loved it.

Jonx178Jonx178over 14 years ago
loved it!!!

i loved the story and everything about it, especially how you added in a nice little mystery in there with the councilman. my only regret is i wish it was longer with more character development, but still a damn good story!

babydollfacebabydollfaceabout 17 years ago
Damn Good!!!!!!

That was hot and very romantic at the same time. cant wait to read more.!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
what a rush!

This is definitely a fast and fun adventure with lots with a smoking hot romance. Great story, TE!

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