All Comments on 'Bobbie Baby'

Yes this was a well done bed time story where everything ends with a final thought and I do so like that way. However need to do a bit more editing afterwards for punctuation spelling errors. Not many just enough to distract. Please keep writting and I'll keep reading.

Absolutely perfect and much better written than most stories. Thank you.

Realistic, playful and very hot. Well done Lula!