All Comments on 'Bobbie Baby'

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Pirate_GuyPirate_Guyover 13 years ago
Terrific!

Realistic, playful and very hot. Well done Lula!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wonderful

Absolutely perfect and much better written than most stories. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Bed Time Story

Yes this was a well done bed time story where everything ends with a final thought and I do so like that way. However need to do a bit more editing afterwards for punctuation spelling errors. Not many just enough to distract. Please keep writting and I'll keep reading.

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