All Comments on 'Boiling Point'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Spa

Very hot - but not a lot of plot!

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Proof reader needed

And really, "engorged"? Isn't it about time people found a different word?! It makes my cock wilt when I see it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Clothed Sauna???

Only in America people wear their swimming gear in the Sauna...You guys obviously need a sauna guide book

jes1701jes1701over 19 years ago
Yummy

Don't listen to all the criticism, I think it was a good story. It was short, to the point and in my opinion every girls fantasy. It made me want to go to a sauna. "And to reply to another comment. Yes we wear swim wear in the sauna,I don't know about you but I don't like at looking at every one naked. And a person who zeros in on that probably doesn't get to see a naked girl any other way."

Any way keep up the good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good job

Great writing, love the line at the end. Made my day. Keep up the good work.

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