All Comments on 'Born Again Ch. 01'

and totally believable! xxx

Such a warm and lovely story. Thank you for writing this touching story of living.

Your characters sound like poorly scripted actors and it went much too fast. Slow down, reread, and make it sound realistic.

After reading a lot of the other stories on this site, this was one of the good ones. Keep up the great work!

A beautiful love story which shows that Love can transcend all barriers in life regardless of whom we are. Thanks for such a story

another chapter would be great

Luv, Luv, Luv this! The passion conveyed is so deep, please continue their story!!

"Sniffles"

Really wish you had continued with this.

The beautiful slow build from friendship, to lover to all out sex ... a beautiful story to experience.