by Wifetheif
Waaaaayyy too short.
Two endings here.
She falls for him or he gets a red hot poker up his arse.
I'm off to buy some coals.
I want the boss to realize he is actially in love with Tammy, and he really screwed up when he shows her his hatred for her. Hasn't he ever heard of killing with kindness? Her kids are going to find out if he shares her too much. That will break her heart. I can't wait to see what's next
People like Brandon usually create lots of enemies. Both in the Business World and in the manner they operate. First off, making copies of all the DVD's and the E-mails go a long way in prosecution in a State and Federal Court. Slavery being very illegal and in this case enforced by threats that can be conceived as real. job loss, realities not wanting to list, the stuff just piles on. I expect Brandon to be going away for a very long time, not to mention the Lawsuit that the Husband files. would be something if Brandon ends up on the streets and the husband and wife end up owning the Company.
And he made videotapes of kidnapping and abusing someone? And hubby just sits there?
I'm not entirely sure who's more stupid, the author or his asinine characters.
if you could and ignore the dumb people who don't seem to get that this is an erotic story.
I must agree with a previous critic. It is the character of the husband/narrator of the story who turns your stomach. I don't care what their financial distress they faced or that his wife consented to the arrangement. Any man who would watch videos of his wife's systematic degredation and do nothing is a piece of crap. It is impossible to feel any sympathy for him.
Give the hubby some balls to seek revenge on the Brandon the sick idiot
Brandon is an inheritance baby of a family owned town. To quote Mel Brooks, "It's good to be the king!" We can be hopeful that this hubris will be his downfall. We can also hope the wife stays strong and the husband grows a pair. Actually having the couple work together against the creep would be a unique twist on the usual. Even (perhaps especially) the boss's minions would be glad to have him simply vanish...no rush to investigate.
The gradual progression to her enjoyment is hot. The stories need to be longer though! By the time you're into it it's over!
don't let he wife and husband split apart....find a way for them to get some revenge
I like the touch that shes been pierced already I would like to see tammy slowly change, to have tattoos to mark her slave to have more piercings and be introduced to bondage, its well written but like to have the stories longer .can brandon claim her mind as well as her body or will yer husband prevail like to find out
Great story but are we going to have to go thru 31 Chapters to get to the end...
I appears that she is his even tho hubby "can see" differently in her face...
30 day later she will be brain washed...GOOOD sex and $$$$
Keep up the good story so far only a 4**** because it toooo slow..
I agree this is a very enticing story and I love the way her humiliation is picking up and she appears to be wearing down. I too would love longer chapters but appreciate your writing, thank you for sharing!!