by Samuelx
If you post a story on March 31st, 2008 I will expose who you are and where you live!
I find the narrative vague and the premise quite far-fetched, yet I love the way that the character was introduced in the first sentence. Sort of like - "Call me Ahab!". Know what I'm sayin'?
i have to hand it to you, it was a nice first story. in the future, think about you want in you story, make it juicy and leave people wanting more!!! you wont get bad reviews if you do that!!!