by DoctorWolf
Great storyline! Your imagination is addictive and I enjoyed each chapter. Keep up the good work.
Damn it. What an awesome story. Please keep going. I would love to read some more storys like this one 😃
Lots of love ...
Worth the time to read. From first page to the end, thouroughly entertained. I laughed. I cheered. Loved the verity of strong characters!
Now going to read your other story.
I hope you are checking back in to see how wildly popular your writing has become. I binge read BTMM in one day and look forward to rereading it again at leisure. I only do this with my absolute favorites. As much as I hope you find raising your children fulfilling I still selfishly wish you could find time to bless us with more of your talent. Like previous comments pointed out... There are whole books worth of material here just waiting for you to bring life to. I hope you find encouragement in the HUNDREDS of votes and comments.
Just read this series over a three day time frame, wow. Well written and thought out. I hope there is more coming from Doctor Wolf.
I stumbled across your two stories some days ago and have read them beginning to end. I hope that once you're done with primary childrearing, you'll return to writing. These stories are wonderful!
I fell in love with this story! You should right this story into a book ,it is that good.I wish you could right a sequel, I think that would be awesome.
please please please continue this series.. you could probably do 60 or more chapters each 4 pages long with this series and still have tons of room to do more chapters.
I am just getting into reading the nonhuman stories on here and was lucky enough to find this story! I think your story was amazing and your writing was outstanding! I truly hope you decide to write more you have a gift for it. Thank you for sharing it with all of us on here!
I want this in paperback form so I can dogear the pages that I want and read them over and over again. *sigh* I loved reading this and my hubby laughed as I in turn had frowns, giggled, laughed out loud, and just grinned stupidly while I read. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing your wonderful gift with us! Paranormal erotic romance/mystery is probably my fav genre! Please keep writing and maybe there can eventually be a sequel? 😺😽😸
Fantastic story, I'm hooked for sure! I hope you'll write more soon about the alphas pups, continued life in the pack, etc. Don't leave us hanging! Lol
This story is SOOOOO good, I've read it like 15 time (literally) and was wondering if you could add more, like few chapters on years later when they have pups, although don't change anything in the story it is just an amazing story overall, it's so good really great story DoctorWolf
Amazing story. I really hope you find the time to continue writing again in the future.
I have become completely enamoured with Joel and Elizabethand the pack!
I NEED to know about the Alpha's pups!
PLEASE give us more!
Maybe a new story about Sebastian and him finding a mate? Or About Will and Dia once they are back with Cedric?
I just finished reading the story and you seriously need to keep writing! This story still has so many directions it can go! You should be published asap!
This is the fourth time I have read this series and was just as enthralled as the first. You make it all come to life and I completely enjoyed It.
is there More to the Story??
Are there More Story's About this Pack??
A very well written story with lots of plots and characters! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. I am in awe of your imagination to the point of thinking it all must be real and how do I join up! Thank you, Mike
I KNOW ITS OVER BUT I WANT MORE THIS WIRLD WAS SO WELL CONSTRUCTED AND SO AMAZING I JUST LOVE IT I COULDNT STOP READING IT! THE CHARATERS WERE SO WELL DEVELOPED AND I JUST DKAJDJAJXNSKAMCND
That was a fabulous story. You're very talented. I hope you get published!
I hope that you will write again sometime soon. Thanks for the enjoyable reading.
I just stayed up all night to finish reading this story, I just could not walk away and come back to finish it. It had me hooked right from the start. You should copy this on paper and send it Harlequin to publish! Great read, your writing is right up there with some of my favorite writers from the Nocturne Series from Harlequin, and this story would fit right in with them.
I may have made a comment before, but I have to make one again. I love, love, love this series. I have read it more times than I can count. I fall in love with your characters every time. Such an incredible story. Thanks so much for sharing your amazing talent with us. Any chance of maybe adding a few more chapters??
I loved the series so much! Really enjoyed watching the characters develop through the chapters. Hoping for a sequel to Elizabeth and Joel's journey!!!
My second time reading your story - just as good as the first time through - well done! I loved it.
I LOVED this series!! I was hooked and couldn't stop reading. I hope you write more because you are so talented!
Outstanding! Amazing!! I loved this series. You are a very talented writer. I was hooked on the first chapter and had to read straight through to the end. This is the second time I have read this. I wish I could find my "mate." Great job.
Just amazing - such an epic read that is quality (aside from the spelling/grammatical errors) from beginning to end. Wish you wrote more stories!
Your series is amazing! I literally could not stop reading this. It had just the right amount of plot, drama, feels to combine with the sex scenes to make it a 1000% better! I'm an author too, but I couldn't even begin to imagine being able to come up with something like this and put it together. Well done!
i realy enjoyed your Story. it was not a simple Story but more like a saga with a whole Fantasy world created inside your talented brain. the Drama was breathtaking, espacialy the part in which she and dia got inside the witch house and she got shot multiple times. the Story was also very complex with many very different chars. 5 fat stars for that masterpiece of Story.
This is probably the third or fourth time I have read this story. I absolutely love it. You should honestly think of publishing it.
loved how you 'mated' everyone. Strong story line, etc. I do have an issue with Elizabeth. Don't feel that she deserved the title of 'Madam Alpha' so soon...she was too arrogant and too egotistical. Taking care of the pack, nothing should be so beneath her as to be 'boring' and farmed out.
Didn't like how she challenged the Alpha in front of the pack, makes him look weak. Alpha status needs to be earned. Should have left her simply to be addressed as 'madam', til she earned her stripes, which she eventually did.
I am not one to criticize English grammar or spelling ,I could figure out what you meant and that was good enough for me . I had a great time reading the story and I thank you for hours of entertainment . Thank you for sharing with us .
Stephen J
Was never an English major, but really loved this entire story! Thank you for taking the time to write it!
I got sucked in from the very beginning and had to force myself to stop reading and go to sleep. Then I woke up and started reading again. Very well written. Excellent storylines. Characters you can't help but love. Thanks you for writing this amazing story!
I don't know where to start. You are an incredibly talented writer. I loved this series. I read this series from beginning to end in a couple of days. During any free time I was reading, I had to know what happened next!!! I was hooked from the first paragraph. I love your characters, their interactions, their storylines. I loved everything!!! Thank you for sharing with us.
I could not stop reading it once I started. I loved it . I'm excited to read more of you stories.
I loved this book, every chapter was well done! I've paid money for shorter and less rewarding books. You also gave yourself a way to write SO many more stories using the same world of characters. It reminds me of the Dark Series by Christine Feehan which is the highest compliment I can give you since she is my favorite paranormal romance writer. I sincerely hope you find a way to get published, maybe through Amazon for Kindle books? Best of luck to you and thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE. You are extremely talented. Try to look up editor/publisher for Lara Adrian. Your writing is easy, smooth, and riveting. Must publish!!!
I couldn't stop reading!!! You absolutely need to write more werewolf stories!!! You should do Nate and shawna's story, and Saul and Katrina's story, I would definitely read that. Just don't stop writing, I want to read more of your stories❤️
I don't think I've ever written a comment on this site, but I had to for this one. I've reread this story at least 5 times since I found it. I love your writing! PLEASE make this story onto a series! You created such great characters with such a cool world, I'd love to know what happens next!
I never comment on stories but yours was amazing that I just had too. I stayed up late into the wee hours reading this story. Please don't let it finish with chapter 20. It feels like there's still so much to tell. We are all eagerly waiting to read about Joel and Elizabeth's pups. Please continue the series. You have a gift for writing.
You're amazing :) please respond and let us know you haven't given up on this story.
I have to agree with some of the other posts. It doesnt feel complete. If it was me i think i would have ended with the birth of Elizabeth's firstborn son. It still feels like there is a story to tell. Also what about that alpha that was missing his daughter. joel promised Alpha Germain trackers in exchange for Rick and the others. Did they ever find her? Keep writing!
Most stories here do not seem to grasp that a woman can be submitted without being less then or humiliated. I loved this story. It would be soo awesome to read about the pups they wanted together and the making there of. Most amazing story I have read on here though!! Thank you soo much!!
This is one of my favorites but it still feels slightly incomplete I can't wait for you to be in a position to write more.
Please.. I know it's been a few years but... Please write more. This was by far the best story I have ever read here and the only time I have ever rated or commented on a story.
I have read this story numerous times as well and each time I get even more hooked to the characters and to the whole emotion and mystique of the story. You are a fabulous writer and I hope you can continue on with this theme in the future...
Just beautiful and truly amazing. I wanted to be apart of it so bad! I laughed and cried along with the characters and it hurts to let this world go. I immediately started tearing up seeing the words "The End". I hope you write more I really love your writing. A very thrilling read and everything about it was 5 stars.
this is my fourth time reading all twenty chapters in succession. Love the whole series. doctor wolf, please give us more of the Latro and Benson clans.
This is my third time reading this story and I still can't get enough. I hope you will do a second part to this story and write a book. Looking forward to reading more from you.
I absolutely loved this story! Somewhere I read that this was your first story, and honestly, I can believe it. I can see where you grew every chapter, and that just made it better! I'm really excited to read more of anything you write, please keep it up!
I love your world! It was fantastic and detailed and so realistic. I wish you would write a sequel. Maybe about when they have kids? You never explained how that works in their world. Sooo that means you should right? :P However, even if this is the end this story as been the best I have ever read on this site. Bar none. Good luck in your future stories!
Oh hell no! I was robbed, we need a modified final chapter. Where is our Maryellen final piece?! I was so waiting for that!! (Pouting;( )
Gawd that was an awesome story though! I could literally enjoy several more chapters of just changing other humans from different tribes and the character interplay involved. Just loved it though! Now I need to see when you wrote this and what else you've done! BRAVO!
I absolutely loved this story- completely hooked on the characters. I realize every story has it's ending at some point, but this one could go on & I'd keep reading!
Thanks for the story.
I have stayed up late reading when I should be in bed haha I could not put it down. I wish you would continue until after they had little ones. Even so I loved every minute of it. So much detail through it all. You should mmake it into a book. I would be first in line to buy it haha so thank you, thank you, thank you for this fantastic story =] I do hope to read more of what you come up with.
I have read and re-read this story and I love it more each time. Thank you for writing such an amazing story, each chapter just pulls you right in. i would love if you ever decided to continue into another series.
Omg couldn't stop reading the whole story was just incredible still craving more even though it's over
Surely the meetings with the other packs were equally different and interesting.
Unputdownable!!! Abso-fuckingly-awesome! I have to wait till the end here to thank you for making my waking hours livable. The lack of sleep & eye bags trying to finish this are worth it. You are a great storyteller & a phenomenal writer, I'm not surprised if you are already an accomplished author. From start to finish, the suspense & storyline is gripping & original. And the hot scenes.....phowarr!!!! Madam Doctor, you really know your human & wolf anatomies, so, well done! And, lastly, please thank Joel, your hubby mate, for sharing you with us. :-) Well done.
I enjoyed this story. I wish we could've gotten to know Dominick earlier. I liked his character: cunning and playful
I have also read this story several times and would love to have more about the pack. Do they have pups? Do Dia and Will go back to Cedrics? More info on the pack please xxxx Look forward to your writings as always.
I always wait until the end to comment but feel I should have after every chapter. What an incredible story. Thank you.
I really hoped that something like that happened to me while reading the story and I suddenly realised... its just a story ... I m really mesmerised by it!!!
All I can say about these stories, they just are happiness ! Simple and very good ! Thanks a lot !
I doubt you will read this now, but if you do I hope that you write again someday. Wonderful story, I lost a Loy of sleep as I could not put it down. With some editing and reworking I have no doubt this could be published by a publishing company, no self publishing needed.
I have read this story several times now. Each time I still enjoy it almost as much as I did the first time. The love that they share is limitless. A great and exciting love story.
Last story was from 2011. Loved your stories though had to stay up all night jus to BBC finish them all.
Wow this was the most action-packed story I've read on this site. At first I was a bit apprehensive about the characters and their development but you totally blew us all away by the end! This was so enjoyable to read, I wish it didn't have to end. If you ever wrote another installment on this series I know it would be appreciated! Thank you so much for writing!
It was really fun to read your story. You are a real talent. I beg you to continue, becouse i think there is so much more in this story to tell. It should be a series like the great ones. Black dagger brotherhood from J.R. Ward, Immortals after dark from Kresley Cole for example. Thank you for the fun i had.
You write stories that entertain. I've read both of your series and if you still publish somewhere I'd love to know where it is.
I hate to see this end. So many more possibilities. Hope you write more on this pack.
Great job, and thanks!
VisualPerv
I really enjoyed this story , I hope you write a more.... loved it .
great story i love werewolves it was very good keep up the good work i cant wait for the sequel,make more werewolf stories to. lol i wish i was a werewolf now more than ever before 😆 i will be looking forward to more of your work you're awesome
I'm hooked and completely addicted. But all great thimg must come to an end (even though im really sad this story is over). Thank you fo keeping me up till 4am all week lol while I read your stories after work. lol I cant wait to read your other stories :D
I have spent the last two days reading this series it is brilliant. You left us with so much to continue with a new series, I hope you continue with this series.
I really wanted them to have pups... You should totally continue this story! I fell in love with these characters!
Plz make more werewolf story's you are such a good writer
But disappointed you didn't have her get pregnant after you drew a lot of attention to the possibility by mentioning estrus and if she was fertile earlier in the story.
Totally awesome story, very epic! I hope you do more with this story. Wolves, witches and humans all brought to a happy ending (well for the wolves). You brought the characters to life when described their feelings and doubts. Please keep writing for us!
.. I'm more in love with, Will or Dominick. :) .. Dominick. How cool and wily (and hot) is he? Love the way he had the whole thing planned out with meeting his mate, down to the earrings :).
I really enjoyed reading the entire story. Cannot wait to read more of your stories. I honestly wish that I could put thought to words like you did. Good job, keep on writing.love it, love it, love it.
Thank you for Bounded To My Mate.
Amazing its just perfect! I can't wait to read it all over again from the start.
I can honestly say this is my favorite werewolf story! I wish it wasn't finished. I SO wanted to see the Alpha have pups :( Still Brava DoctorWolf... BRAVA!