All Comments on 'Bound to My Mate Ch. 20'

Simply amazing, mate!!! I couldn't stop reading this piece of yours. Truly captivating. The plot's carefully laden out unlike the others who engage into a conflict-repeating manner in making their pieces. I couldn't get enough. How i wish you could tell us more of their life, Elizabeth having pups, Joel going into fits of illogical jealousy over someone close to his mate, etc. Thank you for giving me some break in my stressful life.

PS: I so love Dia...I can see myself in her, haha. XOXOXO

What a great story and characters.

Just brilliant

Super story. I've read it twice now and loved it.

You are an outstanding writer, if you ever have anything published you need to share it on here. The story was outstanding, an quite literally took my breath away with its surprises and I especially loved how neatly you wrapped everything up in the end. Thank you for writing, it's truly amazing.

Great story!!! You are a great writer!

Great story. I would love to read more.

Is there a sequel to this story?! Really want to know!

I've read all your stories and I think your an amazing writer. Here's an idea for your next one... Vampires. Think about.

This story is amazing! i can;t help thinking there must be more.

Loved this story! Please if there is any chance of you writing a carry on with what happened to the other un-mated human women! Would be awesome! And if alpha Sebastian ever finds his mate!

I loved this story. Continue writing

Wonderfull story well done is my fav so far :)

I wish this story could have went a few more chapters. Mentioning pregnancy left the story hanging without the readers being able to experience them becoming parents. Please write a few more chapters and expand this story about her conceiving. Other than that drop off this is an excellent story that I have now read 3 times. Great writing. Please continue this series.

I love this story. Are you planning on expanding? I want more Elizabeth and Joel!

I loved this story but not how it ended i was looking forward to her being pregnant and experiencing that while thing for the first time.

Thank you for many hours of pleasure! I hope you continue to write stories like this...to not would be a shame with such talent. Also, Thank you for finishing the entire story. So many just stop for no apparent reason, leaving you mid-air with no where to land. To have talent is nice...to share it...FANTASTIC.

I didn't comment before because I couldn't stop reading!! I heartly enjoyed your story and I'm looking forward to reading the other one you've posted!!! :D If this is your first time writing, then wowzers... you have talent!!

I am new to reading werewolf stories yours is the second I have read.

You drew me in with laughter and tears . Many parts were hard to read .

I had to stop when the tears filled my eyes and reread the page I was on.

The characters were so full of life .I hope you continue to write .

Thank you for the gift of your were-world .

I have always been fascinated with werewolves and animal shapeshifter stories. I got so hooked with this one.. It took me two nights to finish this. I loved the character development and I would love to read more of this.

I read your other story STTS first and was amazed. However I had absolutely no interest in a werewolf story, but knowing you had another story out there that I hadn't read kept calling to me. So much to the chagrin of my household chores I began reading this story. Again I was blown away by your writing. Thank you very much for my trip to the store for batteries.

I have spent the last two days reading every chapter and I loved it!!! It was so detailed and well written. I hope to read whatever else you write and I think you are very good at capturing the moment. Thank you for sharing!!

Don't know what world you're take me to or what a magination your start with next time but I'm sure it will be fantastic please write again soon

I'd love to read more about other packs, especially why the trackers were being traded... Please please please keep writing

I enjoy a good fantasy story, and this exceeds the qualities of a good story. It's simply amazing and rather difficult to put down. In fact, I lost a lot of sleep and writing time for my own stories from staying up to read this. Great job.

Love love love this story. Please don't stop.

Firstly, no, I currently I don't plan to write a story to upload here, nor will I offer my services as a beta reader. By the way, I'm not of the opinion that this is neccessary to criticise some aspects of a story.

I'm not a native English speaker. I understand English pretty well, I am fluent enough to write comments on here, I'm not fluent enough to write anything literary in English that is satisfactory to what I would like to read myself. While I can indeed help with plot problems in a story in a foreign language, I can't offer actual beta reading for the above reason because that's a lot more than just tweaking plot problems. I do beta reading on a platform in my native language occasionally.

And secondly, my current writing project is a mostly non erotic fan fiction adventure story, so not stuff for this platform anyway.

And by the way, my comment doesn't contain any slander or other unpleasantries about the story. If I wouldn't have found it sufficiently entertaining I wouldn't have made it through 20 chapters of it. I said nowhere it's a bad story, I just said the adventure part of the plot is not really skillfully crafted in some parts and leaves me a bit dissatisfied and it has inconsistancies.

Hi,

I just read the whole story and really enjoyed it. Thank you!!!

But this story has a serious problem: It has too many inconsistancies and contradictions and I feel neither the witches nor the rogue wolves were used to their actual potential as foes.

For example why could Alpha Germain not contact his abducted mate telepathically to determine where and with whom she is.

Why do rogue wolves abduct werewolf women when they can only produce offspring with their true mate. On the other hand, when they can produce offspring with just any female werewolf, then why didn't they just turn the captured human women to form a regular pack. Why are there no mated rogues or female rogues.

What about female wolves finding a male mate.

Why are humans who stumble upon the werewolves killed or turned. If these humans actually just find the wolves because they have "wolf" in them already then it makes sense that they go crazy after knowing of the wolves and then return to their human lives. What you gave as reason on the other hand didn't really make all that much sense.

The first abduction doesn't make any sense, either. If the rogues wanted to hurt Alpha Joel, then the only thing that makes sense is to either kill her immediately, leaving Joel grieving and without a mate, and therefor the pack weakened, or to blackmail him to get his money. For neither of these possible purposes "parking" her with with the neutral Lucas makes the slightest bit of sense.

Then the young witch Ryana as a foe was pathetic. Now the idea with the spell that fooled Joel into thinking she was his mate and Elizabeth was her was quite nice (a bit like that polyjuice potion in Harry Potter), but the revelation that the spell actually didn't even work just ruined that whole part of the plot for me, she was not even dangerous in any way. Particularly so when only pages later it is revealed that there actually is a much stronger type of magic. Why haven't you made her use some kind of source magic to do the polyjuice potion trick on herself and Elizabetz to make her a reasonable adversary?

And there is more.

As I said, I find that the story of Elizabeth and Joel is really interesting and charming. Slave to the Servants doesn't have that sort of problem by the way. The whole thing is good, it really really deserves a thorough re-write of the adventure part of the plot and I want to encourage you to do just that!!!!

I read the whole story from the begining and its my firm beliff that you are an amazing writer and you have a passion for it like no other I have read you truly deserve all the praise you have been given and you should think about turning this int turning this into a book and getting it published I look forward to reading more of your work in the near future and would really enjoy seeing further chapters for this story thank you.....the blair witch

I would be forever in love with you if you continued this- even if just in small one shots. I'm dying to know if Joel and Elizabeth have pups and I'd really like a few short stories over some of the newest mated pairs. Lucas and June, Dia and Will, Donna and Paul, Emily and Joseph, Rick and April. They're all just so cute! So, pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!

Loved it. Really hoping you write a sequel or another were story.

Awesome story!! I loved it! You should write another one similar to it or one about Elizabeth having pups! Either way, great job!!

Hi a great story you should write more what happened to the other girls and elizabeth did she have any pups.

This was GREAT. It deserves an award of some kind. Thank you for such a fantastic story!

I've returned to read it so many times, it only seems fair. Plus, I would love to think that might encourage you to extend the Latro saga. Hints were made when Elizabeth was first turned that there would be pups...plus I'd love to see how you'd develop many of the secondary characters now that they are mated. And even more hints were dropped about other magical creatures---though carefully cloaked so we couldn't be sure about vampires or evil fairies. I know your imagination knows no bounds, so I hope your life will allow you to press forward with your fiction.

Thank you again for sharing this, and Bravo!

You should be a best selling author with work like this! Fantastic, a gripping read, excellent storyline with characters of depth. Well done.

This story captured my attention and interest like a good book I just couldn't put it down. I love the way you write, the fact that not everything centers around the sex. It is an amazing story with serious thought put into character development that can be seen easily by the other user comments and the attachment we all seem to have to them. I will continue to be a fan of your writing. Keep up the amazing work.

I keep waiting and waiting... I finished with this story quite some time ago, it was my absolute favorite. And sense then I have not found a single one that come even close to this. I would love for you to write more soon, but I understand you have a baby now which is totally awesome. I cannot wait for you to write more.

I read both stories in 4 days, please do not stop writing. I read a lot and I mean a lot. I couldn't put these stories aside. Thank goodness I work from home, I would have been fired otherwise. I could go on and on, but again I will just ask you to write another story. Also you should look into having these published!

Well I am sad that this story has ended your are an amazing writer I have read many books from JR Ward, Laurie London and Cassandra Claire all amazing books. However you have captured the essences that makes you never wanting to put the book down I became so involved in the characters I was trying to image what they looked like. I hope you will let your story continue as the characters grow as I am sure there is more to tell. Never stop writting you have a gift and look forward to not only reading this again but reading your others books. Regards Sharon from Gold Coast Australia

beautiful story.. very detailed and in depth! I am looking forward to enjoying more of your stories!

one of the best storys ive read cant wait to see if carry the story on ....

Absolutely loved it. :) I wouldn't mind reading a sequel someday!

What about pups and the new couples I love this story please don't quit

I read both stories before but was in too much of a hurry to read the next chapter to vote, re-reading and voting its just as enjoyable the second time around!

when is the next book coming out

Loved both your stories so much i was sad when i finished them . I wanted them to go on forever. love the strong males in your story. You are incredibly talented, i hope you write another story

i love that you told us that your husband's name is Joel. Now i'm over here thinking you are a wereworlf...which is awesome!

Please keep writing this!! I want to see them have pups and how the new couples adapt! You are so talented!

You are a great writer!!! A fantasic combonation of action, love and sensuality! I hope to see more from you!!

Couldn't put it down. I loved Elizabeth and Joel! I can't wait to read some more of your writing.

This has to go on! There are FAR too many stones left untouched. We need to finish hearing about the mating parties, we need to hear about Elizabeth and Joel having children, maybe even give us a story for the grown up children's lives. You can't end here. It's simply not fair. You've written 20+ stories about the aliens, why not write more about the werewolves? I spent so much time reading this stories, to take them away would be quite rude. :P But I do feel as if though this should me made into a book, all of the chapters put together. Why did you decide to end here? What gave you that push? I'm urging you to come back with more...PLEASE. Seriously.

If I could give you 20 stars I would have.

This should be made into a book!!

I am very impressed with your passion and ability!

I hope that my writings someday will be as addictive to the readers and yours are to me!!

I love chocolate!! :-) Success!!

I love this but i think there should more chapters.There's still so many unanswered questions like Elisabeth haveing kids and there life, and dia and will becoming alpha. I feel like their can be so much more to this story..but other then that :-) i loved it

Please write a new story about werewolf there are so little and I love your work with both of you stories bound to my mate and slave to servants maybe a mixture of both of them would be good

Loved this story.

Could add a part where she goes into heat and a few chapters on her being pregnant then the a few chapters on the kid or kids

Maybe a good idea for a sequel would be from their child's prospective? Maybe their female child?

I just spent the better part of the last two days reading this entire story. I loved it! Please write more about these characters.

I'll buy a copy just to support your continued writing. This was/ is excellent!

I loved every page of it ,like any great story I hated for it to end . You created an entire world and made it seem so real ....it would have been nice for one man to be mated by a female wolf ........maybe next time ?????? The sexual scenes seemed so

natural and so nicely done , this would make a wonderful movie !!!!!

I am so pleased to have been given the chance to read this .

Stephen

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Just finished reading. Can't wait for more, I hope you continue.

Just finished reading this for the second time. Please continue the story! Rick and April or Will and Dia or whoever! Just please write more!

Oh, this story was amazing. I've been hooked from beginning to start. If this was a book, I would buy it, and then buy copies for all my friends. Please continue writing stories, this was phenomenal.

Great story, despite the occasional misspell. i would LOVE to see it continue, especially given how you ended this one. I I got to thinking, how great it would be to have an offshoot story from the perspective of some of the other couples, Preferably Rick and April, but I'm sure that you could make which ever pair work. Just please follow up. 8D

A brilliant story, its funny for me to say this, but i came for the sex, and stayed for the story. He He, the story is absolutely brilliant, i'm not sure what publishing guidelines there are, but i would be greatly surprised if they turned a storey of this quality down. In fact i have paid good money for books filled with crap stories. This story however, is worthy of great praise. Keep up the good work, he he and maybe you can get something published for real, and bring such ideas to the greater public he he :P

I look forward to further writing,

Wolf_Soldier

Oh my god I dont want it to end at all I love it so much I stayed up all night for three days just to read it all as soon as possible god its incredibly hot and sexy had me breatheing hard at some plint mmm god get this published I beg yhuu god mmm

I first read this about a year ago and something made me want to come back and read it again! It was just as great as the first time I read it and I still hope you may consider doing a second part to this story, maybe with children or something. Either way I think you create great stories and should continue writing, it's your gift!

I've read both of your series and was really thrilled by the writing, I am hoping to see more stories from you in the future. Maybe you could write a few more chapters for this story though?

I have to say that the only good thing about this story ending is that I will eat for the first time in 12 hrs. As a whole the series was good enough that by the time I got to chapter 3 I knew I was in trouble and was going to be just as obsessed as I was with Slave to the Servants. Now I am going to have to go back and re-read your chapters so I can rate them all properly.

I must say, once again, that you have made a fantastic story

Wonderful story. Well written and fast paced, with intriging characters. Thank you for sharing

I can't wait to see what you write next!

Holy cow. That was such an amazing story. I'm really warring with myself over should I start a slave to the servants or reread this. Great plot, great characters, great vocabulary, sentence structure, you name it. You have thoroughly impressed me DoctorWolf, and I wish I had more of your material to read- in a hard copy at that. Thank you for your time, imagination, and dedication. It is very much appreciated.

I have to agree with the comments.... It kept me up late at night to finish reading every chapter.... I really enjoyed the stories... Please write A story about Anthony...our more about Dominic ;)naughty boy .... But please continue with your stories....

It took me a few days and nights to finish all the stories but I really enjoyed it.

I hardly ever comment but when I really enjoy something as much as I have with these I will.

Thank you for a great story.

I have just read all 20 chapters. Wonderful storytelling.

Having read your other offering I was a bit scared that this wouldn't be so good. How stupid I was, they are both absolutely brilliant.

Wondering if your next story is going to be about the missing DeSantos

daughter and the Alphas mate.....

Not really. You have just kept me up late for the past several with your story. I literally could not put it down. Excellent story, good character develoment and some nice plot twists thrown in for flavor. Also thr erotic scenes were very nicely done and had me greatly aroused. You should thing about getting this story published as an ebook.

I really enjoyed reading your story, so much I actually dreamt and secretly wished it could be real. Thank you.

I loved your series so much that i had to print your book to actually read it cause the light on the computer hurt my eyes please continue with this beautiful story what i want to know is what has happen to Alpha Latro and to his wonderful mate and to the rest of the cast .... there is a lot more to this story and i guess i will have to be patient and see

I LOVED this series!!! I've been reading it everyday after work for about a week. My boyfriend has actually complained that I give Bound to my Mate more attention than I give him. Not like I care. Lol. Back to you though(doctorwolf) I think you are a fantastic writer and I can't wait to read more of your work. 5 stars from beginning to end!! Keep it up!!

And hope you write many more maybe you could tell us about the other packs and their adventures.

I started this series this morning and couldn't stop reading it! I can't wait to read more of your stories.

Started this series at 10 am this morning, and just finally finished it at 11pm the same day. I've loved every bit of it, and just wished there was a sequel to this story. Amazing work of art and literature, you professionally portrayed the sense of safety and protectiveness of each character in the story, and wove something that could be considered believable. I hope to read more works of art from you Doctorwolf, and will always take the time to check back on your works to see if you have anything new.

I loved ur story..... I hope u will write a sequel. I'm really looking forward to what happens between Elizabeth and Joel and what happens with all the other girls

Amazing story!!! Your character development was great! I was really hoping to hear about Elizabeth going into oestrus with her change in attitude and her having pups with Joel!!!! That would be awesome... Would also love to hear more about the humans finding mates!!! Great story over all!

I loved the story

I really like how your characters changed and developed. I find that this is sometimes overlooked in erotic stories, but you did it very nicely.

Furthermore your story leaves *so much room* for sequels!!!!

Like stories about Rick and Angel, Dia and Will, Dominick and Maryellen, or a story about the witches, or....

Just a hint/thought...^^

This story was great to read! Your characters were easy to fall in lust with. As with any story I have read and truly liked, I would always like to see what else can happen in the story line. I won't lie and say otherwise but, a good writer knows that the best story is the one that have the people wanting more and more!

I find it isn't enough. You can continue to add to this story from this perspective and add more challenges to the characters so they can overcome them. That would be my preferred continuation...but it's your story. I would just like to say that I enjoyed your stories and would like to read more from you . I know that you are currently working on another story, but I would like to read more of this one because it is great.

A.J.

I just finished reading this again for the second time, and it was just as amazing the second time around. I love this story! Perhaps some time down the road you can write a continuation of the story,(perhaps the adventures of Will and Dia?) or maybe a prologue? I need more!! I'm sure that many others would agree :) (But not until you finish STTS lol I'm dying to find out what happens. Can't wait to read the new chapter!!

I totally agree, she should have gotten pregnant! That would have been a great twist to the story!

You could always keep writing more!

She needed to get pregnant!!! That would have made the story complete. AMAZING story though.

That was the most amazing story. Throughout the story I kept thinking about how different Elizabeth seems from the end and the beginning of the story. I absolutely loved this story!!! Bravo!

Oh god, I've never LOLed so much from any other paragraph on this site. Hilarious!

I've read both of your stories now. Though initially I thought the stories to be weird, I soon became so intrigued with your story line, character development and writing style, I couldn't stop reading. Great work; look forward to your next offering.

It just can't! I loved this story! I'm still wondering what happens next!

Although, as far as endings go, this has satisfied me enough. So sad it even has to end though :(

So I decided to read this as I was waiting for the next ASttS chapters...and I was not disappointed! It's just as attention grabbing and wonderful! I was so hoping we'd get to see hear about the pups though, because as I have come to realize I don't think there is an end to your imagination! DW you have truly become my favorite author on literotica, and I can't wait to read more of your work!

Hands down literally the best erotic story I've ever read so far. I could not stop reading. I was so sad that there was an actual end to this story! I even tried to stop reading for awhile to make it last longer... :/ This is truly an amazing story and I'm sad to see it end. I hope you continue this just even a little! If we were able to get a glimpse of them with pups that would be such a treat! Thank you for writing! :)