All Comments on 'Bound to My Mate Ch. 20'

No puedo creer que se acaboo!! >.< que mal si tuviera mas de seguro que siguiera leyendo jaja me gusto mucho gracias por mostarnos este trebajo tan chebre de seguro que a mucha gente le ha gustado tanto como me gusto a mi por que 233 comentarios wow mucho

I loved it! You are a wonderful writer! Great characters, great plot, great sex, great everything! I was obsessed with this story and couldn't put it down! Thanks for the story!

Can't wait to read your other story!

Regards from tiggerroo

This was an INCREDIBLE story. I hope to see more of these characters in future stories. Your series as well as one other have inspired me to write my own. I hope you enjoy mine as much as I enjoyed yours. It has been a pleasure to read your work and I look forward to more of the same.

You need towrite a follow up about her going through eustrus (is that what it's called?) and also one with her and pups/kids!!!!! Loved it!

Madam Author hope you feel inclined to keep writing. Not perfect but

I've paid good money to read a lot worse.

You didn't explain how trackers help find other wolves mates! You mentioned it a couple times and I was wildly curious! If u don't plan on revisiting this story universe, please cure my curiosity!

I loved this story! Easily as creative and well written as any novel I've read in the same genre. Can't wait for your next masterpiece!

Fabulous work! I had the benefit of reading it all in one go though so I didnt suffer the frustration of some of your other readers with your cliffhangers hehe. Only thing I wished would have been added as an epilogue was where we see Elizabeth pregnant :) Great work!

That was amazing. For the past two days I have been 100% completly addicted to your story. Just yesterday I was telling my friend about it and now she cant put it down. You've had me laughing out loud like a fool over some of the lines in this book. Its brilliant. I would LOVE it if you wrote more, especially if she had pups. It would add to a huge protective factor and make everything that much more intresting. Please write more :) Thank you!

please continue this story. I love it. I have read it twice and plan to read it again. After I read ASttS for the fourth time. Would love to read about Joel and Elizabeths pups.

It would be interesting to see how much more protective she will become with new pups in the den. Not only hers but the other females who were changed in the story.

Please make a sequel! Your writing has improved so much from reading Ciara's story. It would be great to see how this story develops. I'm addicted!

Ps. Good luck with your daughter's birth x

like that the women killed her self just when she found her mate all the hope and love just gone could you not had them talk longer get to know each other have some one she knows in the pack go with her to the new pack use magic to bring her back

This was an AMAZING story and so beautiful. I really hope you continue it. You mentioned Elizabeth having pups earlier....Am I just wondering here?? haha. But seriously, you are very gifted. All my love <3

I am so appreciative of your work. Thank you for investing the time to write it. I echo the others in begging for more.

Regards

I have read the entire story AT LEAST 5 times and it never gets old. I ADORE the pack! Oh how I wish mine would find me already. I really do hope you will consider a sequel. I want to hear more about the pack and its new members, their children, their lives together...all of it! :)

My deepest thanks for such a wonderful and fantastic story

Looking forward to a sequel with Elizabeth and Joel's pups and maybe side stories about Will and Dia and others.

Favorite series! Please keep it going!!!!

i love this story! i so do hope that you will write more on this story! i would espically love to read about Joel and Elizabeth having pups and how all their other visits to the other packs go! i think you could do lots right from where you have left off from this story and i so do hope that you will write more lots more! i love the characters in this story! :)

this is my favorite literotica story.

good story line. I enjoyed the whole thing. I am glad that I was lucky enough to be able to read the entire thing, though. I hate to read a great piece, and then find the next installment never arrived.

Thank you!

Keep writing ...

Its 4am here for me and I have stayed up way late just to read this series once more to refresh my memory as I read your new chapter that I stumbled upon earlier this evening. I am so glad you are continuing the series and cannot wait for what else you have in store for us! Please keep the writing coming and soon! You have a lot of your beloved reader fans sitting on the edge of our seats what is yet to come!

This story was fantastic, I will happily read anything else you care to write. Thank you!!

Just read this again for the third time!!! Love it, Love it!!!!!! Look forward to reading more from you. Would be great if you connected them in another story, such as Will and his mate.

Just finished this story for the 4th time, amazing writing. keep it up. So hot. :)

I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this story. I have read it now more than once and it never gets old. Your writing is amazing and I have to say this story is in my top 10.

This is one of the best stories that I have ever read on here. I wish it was in print, I keep telling my friends about it. I hated to see the story end!!!!!! My eyes hurt from staying up late to read it, but I could not go to bed. I will certainly be reading this again. Hope you will have more!!!!!!!

It's my second time reading this story and I'm amazed again by the depth of the story and the quality of the creativity for a first novel. I think if you were to spend some time polishing it you could submit to agents (or just cut to the chase and self publish). Thank you for sharing this with us.

I know you've been told before, but you are truly a gifted writer. Your imagination is spectacular, and you are able to convey your imagination in a way that grabs the reader's attention, and keeps it! I've read both of your stories, back to back. I was sad when both of them ended, which is definitely the sign of a great story! Your editor missed some of your grammatical errors, but the errors in no way made the story unreadable. I'd highly suggest sending your writing to a publisher. The worst that could happen is they turn you down. Then try again! Your writing should be out on shelves for the world to enjoy! Congrats on a job well done!:)

I loved this story! You have a real gift. Like most others I would love to see more written about the pack and possibly their friends and children Keep on writing!

Just wonderful ! And addictive

I was hoping we get a story with Joel and him mate with kids. would be great!!!

Brilliant!!!

Oh i loved it, loved it, loved it, please keep on writing!

This has been my absolute favorite story on this site. I really hope that you decide to make a sequel, or another story like it.. Maybe a spin off with Will and Dia or Joel and Elizabeth's pups. Anyway, this was great. Thank you for writing it.

This was an amazing story and I simply loved it. I'm lucky you had released all the chapters before I read it. Waiting for the chapters to release would've been absolutely unbearable. I finished it all in 5 days it was so good. In the beginning, it was so-so, but as the story progressed, you really explored Elizabeth's and Joel's relationship and I'm amazed at how well it turned out. And all the little things you put in made the world seem truly alive. I'm sad that it's over, and I agree with others that you should write an epilogue of sorts, something to wrap up all the loose ends.

Enjoyed these characters and the story was captivating! Would you ever consider continuing this series? Please? :D

I loved your story! Amazing work!

I felt like parts of the story were missing maybe its just a couple words here and there so I got confused lol by the way this is the 2nd time I've read this story although the first time was a couple years ago. Are you planning on adding to this later?

Loved this series, was sad to see it end.

I have spent the past few days reading your stories and hope there are more to come.

Well Done.

I have never been so addicted. You are a talented writer and an inspiration to my inner author. I hope you continue your writing because I will be looking for your work.

This is a awsome story and would be only complimented if you added to it

I was so sad to see this end... It was such a good story... I hope that you will find time to make a part 2 of this story... I don't think I would ever get enough of this story....

Your stories are brilliant! I am hooked on both and have retread them while waiting for new chapters in your second story. The erotica is well done and meshes with the storyline. It's never forced and creates a beautiful illustration.

I have just finished both of your stories and I love them both... but this one is the better one. Great job and I can't wait to see what you come up with next!!

I'm so curious about how Elizabeth would experience were wolf pregnancy, and what sort of parents Joel and she would be. Children have not played much of a role in "Bound to My Mate," so there is a lot of unexplored territory---both emotional and in terms of your creation of the were wolf community.

Meanwhile, I hope that all goes well with you and yours in the coming year.

Iv been reading this for the second time it's taken me 2 days to finish reading it all

But looking at the comments every one but mr dry opinion whants you to Continue this story

Your other story is good as well

Amazing you really make this into a book :)

stumbled upon this story and I have to say.. it was very good.. I like your story content and I love that it's not just all sex which is something that can be read anywhere.. I prefer the stories I read to have some actual story to them, to make me care about the characters and get into what they feel.. very well done!! I look forward to checking out more of your work :)

I've read 2 of your series now! I wish you'd continue them! I absolutely love it!

I read chapter one... and then kept going til i was finished reading it!!! Its now 4am on Christmas morning...That should tell you how good this was!! All i can say is Wow wow wow!!! Thank you for such a great read!!

I just read the whole series in two days, and the whole time I was away from I was thinking about the Story. I could not get enough of it.

Thank you for writing it, the way you made your characters was beautiful and intriguing. I am very grateful for you putting your story down. I have enjoyed it a lot.

This could very easily be made into a blockbuster movie, even bigger that Twilight ever that it was. Excellent plot, fantastic visual imagery and exceptional flow.

You r a gifted writer!! I can honestly say that i enjoyed this story from beginning to end. I look forward to future writings. It had the perfect amount of sex and drama!! Keep up the awesome work!!

I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF THIS SERIES!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!

I'm so glad I read this story. If you hadn't needed to take a break from your other I might not have. I do hope you continue it at some point. Your study and depiction of pack life and meshing the wolf and human systems is such a unique perspective. I also want to see another book about the pups. Joel and Elizabeth are two of the the freshest, most respectable, loving and sexy characters I've read. The idea of the humans having to give up their whole lives made sense, but we never really learned who they were giving up. Families they grew up with, or husbands and children. That would be an impressive feat: if you could make it acceptable for a woman to walk away from a man she loved deeply and her children! Especially her children. Maybe they join the pack? A challenge to inspire another book.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! You are an excellent writer and I hope you publish your stories to share with the world!

I have no idea how I forgot to read this before. You are a vEry very talented writer. I love both your stories and hope you continue to write more. A follow up to this story would be nice. Did they have pups? Are vampires real? There are so many unanswered questions.

I can't even decide which of your stories I like best, but I'm thinking it may be this one!!! Please, do write more!

X

This was fantastic. I read it all in one sitting, I just couldn't get enough. Thank you for sharing this with us. I loved the characters and the story line and happy endings always make me happy.

xoxo

C.

It was a joy to get to know these characters ! I couldn't but it Down plz keep writing !

I agree with a previous poster, you are the best writer on this site. Please continue your excellent work. This was truly a page turner and has distracted me very effectively from whatever else it is that i do.

Please write more, I just can't get enough of this story. Do not underestimate what a good writer you are.. Please continue!!

i love the ending but in ways it feels like a cliff hanger, I want to know if they have kids what happens to the other females, did all of them find mates, i want know what else is out there if they have more adventures to over come. i hope you write more i love your stories very much.

I'd really like to read more of Dominick and Maryellen... for some reason those 2 just stuck with me.

Enough said

Ive now read both this story and slave to the servants, and ive got to say those two stories are the best ive read on literotica. Keep up the damn good work

I've read this story twice now and it's soooooooooooo good. I'm even reading 'Slave To The Servants' which is also a damn fine read. Now I know you're having to take a break from writing for a month so all I want to say is I hope you can find the inclination to continue this story. If you feel like it's at the end then oh well. Please continue to write for here as you're stories are so enjoyable and the reason why i've gotten hardly any sleep over the last 3 days. :) Congratulations again on a superb story and I look forward to seeing more from you.

Your work is awesome, I defiantly think at some point you should revisit this story. I would love to hear about when the alphas get pregnant. And you let Elizabeth and us in on the fact that there are other things out in the world, it would be nice to be able to learn more.

I just want to say MORE please

You have to continue this story. I agree with others. You should go into the breeding process and add more drama. I originally starter reading for the sexual parts but now I just want to read about the characters! Please continue. And get your work published!!!___

Please give us more! Elaborate on their relationship. Show her going through her"heat". Give us more pack growth. Show the matings of the other women...ANYTHING!!! I NEED MORE OF THIS!!!

Please and thankyou.

I really enjoyed the whole storey and have stayed up late every night to work my way through it. Please can we have a sequel sometime. The way they showed how they could still be individuals but work together made it seem all the more real. Many more of the same please.

Great story, i love the way they grow throughout....learning about each others strengths and their strong wills battling to protect the pack. Don't stop....find the sequeal.

I think this was a great story but was kind of upset by the ending. I like how everything was wrapped up neatly with happily ever after but definitely would have liked to have seen Elizabeth go through a pregnancy and delivery and of course the Alphas parenting skills. Also, the rest of the packs visits to their den to find mates and more people challenging Joel and him kicking their butts! I think you are a very talented writer and will definitely be looking up more of your stories!

Please make a sequel!!!

I have never ready any erotic stories before and was simply facinated when I discovered this site. I LOVE to read and your story was amazing! I actually did nothing else all day! I started reading it around 11 AM and did not stop until I finished it, about 4 AM. (to which I went in and woke up my fiance for a nite time session!!)

PS He said thanks! :)

I absolutely love this story. And if you ever decide to write more on it I will for sure come back and read it.

I liked very much

Your imagination is wonderful and stimulating

I became a big fan

I enjoy all your stories, you are an incredible writer who should continue writing. You have an incredible imagination to write like you do. I do enjoy the characters in this story. I hope you come back and write a sequel after you finished A Slave to a Servant. Just say this I'm hooked and i want more

And it just gets better. You built so much detail into the story that different things pop out with each reading.

What a marvelous job you did in creating a were world, rich in detail and strongly footed in its own logic.

I particularly admire your ability to plant seeds in chapters far in advance of where they bear fruit.

Wonderfully done, Doc!

U should continue it. They need to hav puppies. I usally don't read the werewolf stories but i read the first few chapters to see what it was like and i loved them soo much, the whole series was fantastic. Not a moment where i hated any of it. Well done writing this.

I don't really feel like commenting on each and every chapter in this series, but all were three to five stars. While an interesting story, and mainly well written, a few things stand out.

Unlike "Slave to the Servants", this story seems to have lacked an editor, causing plenty of correctly spelled wrong words. This isn't any fault of the writer, as the errors were few and far between, but they were noticeable.

While a good read, "Bound to My Mate" isn't as believable as it could be. The amount of rutting going on, and the reasoning that "it's the wolf" that causes it, is a bit incredulous. Animals only have sex while in heat, and as Beth stated, they are only in heat once per year. That alone makes the amount of sex unbelievable. Despite this, the story has a wonderful plot, complete with buildup, climax, and a wonderful ending. This left me wanting to read more of them, but not feeling like any loose ends needed to get tied up.

I enjoyed how DoctorWolf used this, her first story, to establish her name here. Elizabeth is a doctor and a wolf, and you might notice that "Beth" is short for Elizabeth, and that she is also married to a Joel. These items leave a reader wondering just how much of this might be real... and how much is pure fantasy. A bit of wonder and curiosity about the real score is good in our society, where we no longer even believe horoscopes ever had any truth.

Overall, this story is an amazing read, and I give the entire story a '4 star' rating, marred only by the incredibility, typos, and the few contrasting facts of the story. For a first book, this Author has done amazing things, and I look forward to DoctorWolf giving us many more stories that span the genres.

awsome story plz write more about them having puppies!!!!!

Wonderful story that was beautifully written. I have read it twice and now I want part 2! We need puppies for all the newly mated pairs. PLEASE. They had to learn how to be so open somehow, right?

great work, one of the best in a long time, keep it up can't wait to see more

i dont want it to end yet its to good to end yet

Now, I have read both your story series, and I love them both. I can't wait for what you will write next....hint hint.

Oh please I have found this story so addicting! I have been looking for something that could become a nice long story I could read. And there are so many stories within stories! You could easily start something amazing. I would love to see Joel dealing with an expecting Elizabeth! Or Will with an expecting Dia it would be AWESOME!

I am truly addicted and cannot wait to read more hopefully you will keep the story going!

just finished this today.Was hoping to see what the alphas would be like with children of their own. But the ending was great.

I have actually read this story twice. I read it a while ago when there were only 12 or 13 segments. When I saw that there were so many additional segments I started the series over. I have PAID for books that were not as well written and an as engaging as this. Great job and I can't wait to read more from this writer.

I have never had the urge to run around naked in the forrest before! Your stories own me. The PERFECT balance of HOT scorching sex scenes and beautifully crafted characters that wrap me in a world I can almost smell and taste. A place where a fantasy lives that is sexual and pushes the edge and is still completely healthy and wholesome. I beg you to feed my addiction really soon! You're perfect. So perfect. Every scripted moment is golden. You deserve the Nobel Peace Prize for what you have accomplished in my house alone. Ok I'm gushing; but in all fairness you have me all gushey so Thanks.....really.

So, I LOVE both of your story series!!! I am anxiously awaiting your next installment of Slave to the Servants, but wanted to reread my favorite Bound to My Mate chapters! I want more! More about all of them! I have a feeling I'll feel the same about the Slave story...can you post any short stories (in either world!)???? That would be so awesome!!!!

First off I have read on literotica for two years now just other genres. I may have commented on there other stories before now... Generally I'm too lazzy lol further more I'm on my phone and its a real bitch to type so that proves how much I loved your story. I was reading your other story and got caught up so I figured what the hell you seemed to write well let's try the other story though I rarely like werewolf oriented tales. This one had a rocky start but I'm glad I stuck through because I became addicted like crack I read in bath at work in bed and got through it quick. One word amazing... It became my world I felt I was in the pack rooting for my alphas and new friends I will have to beg for more too I would like to hear of pups I want to know what color the new females coats will be.. Maybe from the point of view of dia and still as alphas in training there so close knit A group you can still mention all the rest of the couples and pack issues. I would love to hear more for a person who found get first werewolf story don't leave me hanging... Thanks new reader who will read anything you write for you are phenomenal

That was a very enjoyable read, one of the best if not the best. Keep up the creative spirit!

Just an epic story in terms of both quality and length.Thanks for your stories and I hope to see more in the future.

This story was one of the best I've read :) I look forward to start reading the other one :)

OMG AWESOME STORY!!! YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE ASAP!!! THANK YOU!!!

i also stayed up late to read this. it's now 2:30 :P this was such a good series. hope the alien one is as good!!

Sat up all night to read this through. If you aren't already published you should be; reminds me hugely of the Anita Blake book series. Loved it!

Darling, you are amazing! I came across this while waiting for the next chapter of your other story and became completely hooked! I hope you keep writing for a long time.

You have a fantastic talent and I seem to fall in love with every character you create...please please please keep writing!

ha, i read another story's comment/complaint that said 'were' stories always have too much story and not enough sex. but i loved this. the plot and characters really sucked me in, and making myself NOT devour all these chapters was delicious torture (plus, it really is good for me to occasionally sleep as many hours as is recommended).

hope you start a new project soon!

Thought you would have at least gotten her pregnant