All Comments on 'Bound to My Mate Ch. 20'

Sweetie:

Loved...loved....loved the concluding chapter. It was smokin hot the way you depicted Dia and her powerful energy. She was definitely an Alpha bitch in the making and you didn't play.

Absolutely loved the way you described her spirit and sexual energy. She was a hottie and the men recognized it. Felt one hell of a connect with that power.

This was a wonderfully entertaining story. Well written and organized with a delightful flow. I look forward to reading your other and future products.

I know that I am supposed to comment on each chapter, but I had to keep going to the end. 10 of 10 plot; 9 of 10 grammar and spelling; 10 of 10 personal interest. Now we know why you used Joel! Sneaky but really cool. I am off to read your next story set. I can only hope that it equals this one. Bravo!

I love this story ! This my third time re- reading it & it just keeps getiing better each time. You definely have a gift for writing

this story was amazing. please keep up the amazing work and writing. i wish it never stopped.

I am reading your new story and just finished this one. I will say that you are the first author to catch my interest enough to keep coming back for more. Please don't stop writing. You are amazingly talented and creative. Your stories lines are well developed and I love all of you characters!

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Please don't stop this story here. I need more for my life to be complete!

I enjoyed reading this story as a whole, even if some parts were questionable :) Overall: spectacular!

This was an amazing story! I could read it over and over

Thanks for a great story. I can't wait to read more from you!

What more can I say? It was a great story. Well written and addictive. Hell, I would turn into a werewolf if I could have a great love like that...I think most men SUCK! You gave him all of the traits any one would want with out making him unbelievable. Too bad those kind of pure, straight forward bonds aren't real.

I can't wait to see the movie! And I not even into public sex...but if it's like that...well.

An Admirer-WT

what happened to the rest of the women what happened rick and his mate I want more

did will leave and start his pack

I absolutely loved this story and I wished there was more to it!!

You did an awesome job!!

Nooooo!!! The story cant be over yet, they never said if they had children. NOOOOOO!!! Well, I am betting if they DID have puppies they would have had their parents personalities! Humph!

Oh, I am sad now that this story is done! It was wonderful! I NEVER read stiries with multiple chapters on here because I don't usually find them interesting, but your story kept me intrigued all the way through! I wish you'd write more...maybe about Will and Dia as Alphas of the Benson pack?

This has been a very enjoyable read. In addition to the fluff there's interesting characters, unique lore and absolutely amazing and unpredictable plot. I tend to loose interest soon when the story is too predictable, it is rare to find something that isn't. I like it a lot!

I've read a lot of supernatural romances, and I had to comment that your story rivals if not blows most of them out of the water! There were some very refreshing and unexpected ideas in your story that worked well along side the expected lore. Congrats and thank you for a good read!

please write a few more chapters..do they have pups? oh i loved this story so much i never wanted it to end... but im glad you are currently writing the sci-fi story that is great as well...

Thank you for sharing your passion and joy. This was a very amazing and fulfilling story. I hope you will consider giving us an Epilogue or maybe even a spin-off.

Honestly, I think you should write a sequel to this... the ending left me wanting to know more.

I read your entire story before leaving any comments. This story is amazing you are indeed a wonderful talent and I can't wait to read your others . Please keep writing you "ROCK!!"

Just finished reading this and sad to see the end! You are a great writer and had me addicted the last couple of days. I just wish there were more stories like this on literotica. It's so hard to find stories that draw you in like this. Thanks for sharing it. ;)

This was the best series I have read on literotica. You had me right on the roof to jumping from the exploding helicopter. I could marinate in the scenes you created.

I know this series is done, but please keep writing! It would be absolute torture to wait for more.

Thank you for a all the lost sleep. I couldn't stop reading and that is a ok with me!

Great story. Good all around balance with intro, conflict, conclusion. SO many stories in this genre just have sex with furry creatures and no depth or story telling involved. Somewhere I saw someone comment that you don't have enough sex and too much story, which made me laugh. The whole point of this site I thought was to tell stories with some well written and juicy sex to boot.

Keep up the good work, you have a good grasp of the basics and a nice style.

Awesome!!! I loved the balance. Great action scenes and sequences and the sex was phenomenal!!! I also enjoyed the characters and you did an amazing job building them and making them more real. I truly enjoyed this entire story so much that I couldn't stop! thank you I can't wait to read more of your stories!!! ~Sara~ :-)

I loved this story! I truely enjoyed reading it and I hope you write more in the future!

...good group sex! Maybe in another story you can concentrate on two/four main characters at a time to give up perspective on the same scene and a little more sexual variety to look forward to. For example...I would love to have known Domonic the tricky tracker from the beginning...his admiration for the lady alpha...his perspective on fuckbuddy sex...his antics and adventures while doing what he was suppose to be doing for his Alpha...his feelings of love, duty to the pack and respect for his Alphas (and maybe a little lust for the lady Alpha until he saw his mate). Then I would appreciate a peek into his trickyness in spying on his mate, scenting his mate, getting his mate to slow down in trying to show how brave she was and finally his and her perspectives while sexually gearing up and up to changing his mate...another avenue of a different perspective into the story and fucking...

All in all, as I've written before and will probably write again...you can WRITE YOUR ASS OFF!!! It's just your world and I'm a peeping tom...thanks Dr.Wolf!

I really loved this story I finished reading this story from start to end in one whole sitting couldn't believe it was your first story really good hope you do a sequel to this story in the meantime I really love A Slave to Servants whose next chapter I am waiting eagerly

I love you writing! I'm dying to know how they'll be if they we're parents together. Unlike a lot of authors on here, you focused a lot on their relationship as a whole and not just sex which made this sooooo much more powerful and addicting to read. Can we please get a sequel with them and kids? or just her pregnant?

Most definitely my favorite on Literotica. What your chapters lacked in editing was made up in character development and plot. Keep working on your sex scenes and proofreading and I think you have what it takes to be the best author on the Internet. Thanks for the read!

I really loved this story! Thanks for writing it!

I love shape shifting and vampire stories (even more when they are erotica's) I found this story last night and have read it all in less than 24 hours. You have so much more you could write about so I hope you don't give up on this story line totally. I will be checking back! (and watching the bookstores)

Im so sad that's its over I was hoping to read about her having pups and growing their children. Im sad

soooooo good!! i was sad to see it end. you should write more about the other werewolves

awesome story i was hoping for pups but this was cool too lol

I'm an avid reader of the supernatural romance genre and your skill is right up there with them all. I hope that you will continue writing and can hopefully be published. I will certainly become one of your many fans.

i've just read the whole story over again and i'm still wishing that there was more... how will the visits to the other packs go? what will the other packs be like? will emily find a mate there too? how is madam alpha going to do at being part of all the pack meetings? will there be babys in the alpha's pack soon? will dia get her confidence back with the pack? ...i know im being really soft but i really hope you'll think about writing a sequel!!

You go to be Kidding me?? Your Stopping?? Why You had a very Loyal Following Here Reading Your Story. Why would you want to Stop??

Please keep going or at least Start Another One.

Hi, I really liked this story. It was very well written and the characters were very well rounded. I can't wait to read more of your work. Have you ever thought of publishing your work? (www.lulu.com, www.printondemand-worldwide.com) I would willingly purchase this and I know of a few friends who would as well. Thanks again for all your hard work.

Thanks so much for the story. It really is a great one. You really did a beautiful job making it so real, putting lessons in it. You brought all the characters to life and do a great job of making the reader feel invested in the characters. You gave such great personalities to the characters. So many of them were really amusing like Dominic and the stuff he'd done. And then there was the sweetness of the relationships between the couples. I like that they had weaknesses too. I loved the details you put in like the reasons for the women being kept from returning to their human lives. All around it was really engaging and enjoyable.

was surprised that Will and Dia mated at the Latro pack's lands. Since he was a future alpha and she the madame alpha, I would have thought they'd mate at Cedric's pack lands. Cedric had claimed her too afterall. I know we'd come to care about them so you wanted to share their mating with us. I am really hoping that you will continue with this world. I'd love to see you do Cedric's story. Maybe he can find another mate?? I don't know if it is possible to have more than one. I assume Will's mom is gone? I really would love to see more. I know you'd create a great cast of characters in that pack too.

It was such a wonderful story and I hope to see more from you really soon!

just want to say i was enthralled with the the chapters. you did a great job. was wondering if you were gonna start another one off the same main characters but few months later, there just seems like there is so much more to explore and tell.

Loved that there were all kinds of feelings in it!

This whole story was great. Loved every 1 of the chapters. Can't wait for your next series

I have to say, I read all 20 chapters over two days. This story was addicting! It was the perfect blend of erotic with an actual plot and story line. Great depths to the characters. This was amazing. Please, please, PLEASE write more!

Hey DW, I'm sure you've already read it from others but you've addicted us. We are all infected with your almost real life story. We need 2 or 3 forms of closure. Will and Dia must become reigning alphas. Elizabeth and Joel need many litters. And lastly, Sebastian Germain, the poor soul, needs a mate found in one of the rescued women. Please continue to write there is still much more to do. If you are not a published author, you damn well should be. I love the content, contrast, adventures, and character developments.

This story was just wonderful!, i was role-playing with this guy and he showed me this stroy and it rocked! so i was wondering if your gonna be writing another part to this story where Eli and Joel have a kid or two and new trouble arrises for the new generation of the Latro pack? it would be really cool! but another than that this story rocked!

You obviously put heart and soul into this series; the passionate writing reflects it. Your work is wonderfully erotic, suspenseful, and creative. I hope you'll be inspired to post more stories here soon!

Do you have any plans to continue with any or all of the couples you brought to the forefront of your story? There are almost endless possibilities if you choose to do so...

I enjoyed this story. I hope you write more.

It's funny, I just realized how well you managed to infuse medical information and health care into this story. I finally appreciate the truth in your name and I'm impressed you managed to skilfully incorporate it into the story without making it seem like you just inserted paragraphs from a medical textbook.

For example, when June first arrived on pack lands and was injured, you described through dialogue and narrative description what the diagnosis was.

On the whole, this story was very well-written, but I'll be very upset if another series isn't at least continued from this one. I feel like I've been very patient waiting for more stories from you, and good writers can be difficult to come by. Please, please, please continue writing!

Thank you :)

Really enjoyed the whole story. Would love to see it continued into further chapters maybe one where the alpha pair have their own "pups" u are an acomplished writer an I've enjoyed getting to know ur charactors.

So yea, I just found this lovely series at about 10 pm last night, and I just finished ALL 20 chapters!! I know it's sad that I did absolutley nothing else for the last 24 hours, but I couldn't help it. I've been in bed reading, but now ima go take a shower and get something to eat. Smh... Thank you for your awesomeness! Continue writing! I saw your writing change and get better ever chapter I read, the mistakes got less and less. 10/10

-topthatdrea

it really is. :) it's not without faults, but i still completely enjoyed reading this. please continue writing.

As with all the others...I could not stop reading. I was fortunate to be able to read all 20 chapters at once. I couldn't stop reading the story it was so well written. I almost felt sad when it ended! Keep writing your stories.

one of the best stories i read!!

keeps you reading even though i should be doing other things

please keep writing such great stories

This was an amazing story, like everyone else I could not stop reading. Even read it while I was meant to be working. One of the best stories on here, loved it. Hoping you continue the story or would love to read another one. Thanks for a great read :)

and I finished this story completely fullfilled. Said you took some time to write another story? Would love to read it.

Wonderful story telling

Perfect finish

you did wonderful; i would love it if you wrote some moree [;

i've read the entire series in one sitting it was that good. I agree that the series should continue,only I'd like to know about the Alpha that need trackers to find his mate.

I am guessing your name is Elizabeth as well as his is Joel considering the comment at the end, I was taught to never use my real names in my stories xD but it was great and enjoyable.

That said, in all honestly, no matter how hard I would like to become a wolf like that... I don't think I could. I am to closely nit to my family, and I have someone, and I would rather not do something with someone else just to become a werewolf xD lol. But a great story none the less, I loved it. I spent all day reading it, from when I woke up at 8am to now (12:34am)

But, I really need to say this....

PWEASE, PWEASE!!! Make a epologe or something. I want to know everything after this, I want to know who mated with the females that weren't mated yet, or something, and I wanna know if/when the Alpha's have their pup, I wanna know what they will name their pups when they have them, I want you to continue with something D: I really

At least make a second series? Maybe one with their pup and how he/she found his/her mate? and something happened that they had to fight to protect their pack? I would love to have more, I know you closed everything off relatively tightly, but i would love to see more...

But all in all, congrats on a great job ^-^

Very nice work. Finally got through it all and I have to admit it's been a great ride!

Lot's of fun and adventures!

Love your work, are you planning on continuing, or perhaps another story?

I am not lying I literally just sat in my room and read this whole series... I loved it, I really enjoyed the latter half too... I love it when writers go past the sunset ride. Thank you so much for sharing...

As with other posters, this story should continue!

I completely agree that this story needs to continue at least an epilogue to see if they had children and what happened to other mates and their futures. This was a great story and loved it from start to finish hopefully you will continue!!!!!!!

Please please please.... with extra sugar on top... tell me you are making inroads another story in this universe...

News of this delightful story made its way to me through the writer's grapevine and, I have to say, I couldn't be more pleased that it had. I don't typically read erotica (I write romance and YA, as well as beta read various other genres), but this story was exquisite. The storyline was seamless, the flow was nearly perfect, and you hit upon and elicited just about every emotional reaction a reader can have. I believe I read somewhere in the comments that this was your first attempt at writing, and I'm truly surprised by that. You spread your wings beautifully with this story, and it is clear you have an innate talent with words. I'm not sure if you intend to query this out to agents, but I certainly hope you consider it. I story like this should be shared with the world - it's too compelling not to be. Good luck with all that you do, and thank you (from the bottom of my writer's heart) for sharing your story with us. I am in awe.

- JP

I have loved your story since the very first paragraph! I know I will not be alone in waiting patiently for your next story! Can't wait to see what you have for us next!!

I want them next. Dia is my girl. I love Joel. That's my hubby middle name and one of our son's name. Love your story soooooo much. Very well written.

I found this one by accident. I actually started about chapter 3 or 4 and I stopped about 2 paragraphs into. I had decided I was going to try them from #1 and see how it went. So few actually keep me hooked with this many chapters. However, I loved everyone of them. I do hope to read more chapters in the future, maybe pups? Don't know but I will keep it bookmarked and check back from time to time.

thank you.

a plethora of characters to follow, and i think that threats still exist for this pack and the others

One of the best stories I've read.

Hope you will post a new story soon.

Took me forever to read this but I really enjoyed it...good job!

The fun you had writing this story pales in comparison to the fun and joy your audience had in reading it. Thank you for investing the time to write this and share your talent.

I look forward to your future submissions.

Best wishes

I really enjoyed your story, it was really compelling. I am hoping that you will continue soon.

This story was totally amazing!!!! I couldn't put it down and wished there was more to read. I would like to know how things turn out for Will/Dia, Lucas/June, Rick/April, and Dominick/Maryellen... Please promise you will continue to write off of this story...please, please, please!!!!

When i realized this was the last chapter i was devastated. This is one of those stories you pick up and almost cry because you realize their story has ended. It was extremely well written and i give you 10 gold stars.

I started reading Chapter 1 probably 3 days ago and I could not stop reading it! At home I'd read it between chores and emails, and during my commute I'd read it on my phone. I thought you did a brilliant job of fleshing out the characters and giving them distinct voices and personalities. It was smart, sexy, and a great lens into werewolf fiction. I hope that you will consider tightening the language and grammar, running it through spell check, and perhaps by someone you trust with eagle eyes and good literary taste. Then, I'd strongly encourage you to shop it around various publishing houses. My favorite character was Dia, by the way--she was completely sassy and totally cracked me up. Good luck with future stories!! I will concur with many other fans that I am completely sad that the series is over (at least for now ;)...it was an exhilarating read while it lasted. Your pacing, speed, skill at tension, plot, storyline and comic relief were great, but I do think in the future your writing will be even stronger with a sharp editor who will catch storyline discrepancies. (For example, if Elizabeth is a doctor, why is it that Joel even needs to tell her what estrus is?) Anyhow, this is just me nitpicking--I hope you realize what an awesome feat it is when someone is doing that, because it means you have succeeded in the big picture already. Kudos, DW, and thank you for sharing this wonderful gift of fine storytelling with us.

Best,

Tawny O

That was by far the most puttogether,awesome, seductive,fantasy story I have ever read in my 23 years of life! Oh for the love of Luna, publish it already! I could not wish anymore with my heart, that this was real. BRA~freakin~VO!

ENCORE! ENCORE!

THE PACK DEMANDS IT!

Great story! I couldn't get enough of it! I'm looking forward to seeing what you write in the future

Thanks DW I loved reading every page of this story and i got really into the characters as they are so likable i'm sorry it has ended but i do hope you may expand on this story it would be interesting to read about the other packs and how they fared since this incident happened

I have loved this series since Chapter 1, and I can honestly say I am saddened by the fact its over! PLEASE keep writing more! And if you ever become published I will be one of the first to line up with cash in hand! Awesome work!

I just came across this study and read it in 2 days. It was fabulous!!!

I don't want this to be the end. There are so many things left to happen. I want to know what happens to each of the couples. I want to know about Joel & Elizabeth expecting pups. You have gotten me addicted. So please, please continue this storyline.

since you are addicted to our comments!LOL So let me say this YOU ARE DRIVING ME CRAZY! Even though I read the words The End I keep checking daily in the hope that you have decided to continue this wonderful addictive story after all, not reading what happens to my pack is so depressing! I fell in love with Joel and Elizabeth from chapter one as you will see by the comments I have written on every single chapter,you have been on my favourite author list from the get go and was heart broken when the chapters stopped. So please post again very,very,very soon as your loyal fans are here waiting NOT to patiently for more from you!

I'm a little late to the party, but I just wanted to say that I have really enjoyed reading your story. I think you have shown strong improvement in your writing style over the course of its chapters. I truly hope that you do continue to write further stories about these characters. Something about Maryellen is very alluring to me. I really liked the way she was strong willed and vulnerable at the same time. You did a great job with all of them really. Thank you. :)

I have loved reading it, many times over. Your understanding of trauma is deep and rich and *accurate* and as a person with PTSD I am amazed and grateful for that. You write adorable characters and like many others I have that full sense of the world and people you've created that makes me sigh happily and regretfully at seeing the words "the end."

I'll be eagerly following your writing here from now on, you've been on my favorite authors list from the start.

I have so much enjoyed this story. My Mate and I have been reading this together and find so many things that parrallel Our relationship and how it has formed and become what it is today. I do hope that You take this another step and write more.

There are so many characters with in this story that more could be written about:

Cedric and His ties too Joel. How they came together and how their friendship was so fully forged.

More about Cedric and how He grew to be such a force in teaching and his wisdom.

The relationship of Joel and Elizabeth and their children.... chuckles with all those new mates should be a lot of new pups in the den soon.

Oh and Maryellen. The packs finances and what might or might not happen to them with so much jealousy from the witches...

You have set out a litany of characters and story lines that You could bring out that We might have the joy of reading this story line for a long time to come.... I really hate to see it come to an end.

I think I can speak for My Mate as I speak for Myself.....

WELL DONE ... WELL DONE

I've totally enjoyed reading your story from when I first started after you were about 1/3 done. I've looked forward to all the new installments ! Thanks for sharing, and I hope to be reading more of your work very soon :)

I love this story. It has been great to read it. I'm sorry it has finished.

Please write another story soon. You are a good writer.

What about Alpha Sebastian Germain. What was the deal about needing trackers to find his mate? Please write a story about him and also let us know what happens to the other human women and if they find their mates. Please don't stop now, your story is one of the best I have read on here and I have read alot of the nonhuman.

I love this story but I am sad to see it end. I hope you write more wonderful storied for us readers! Keep writing!

I have to admit! Your story is the best story ever written on Lit. Not just in NonHuman Category but of all categories! Yours is the best!

But then, what about their pups? You could've put some epilogue to this story about Joel making puppies in Elizabeth.

An absolutely addicting story! I was hooked from chapter one and have anxiously awaited each subsequent chapter. Thank you for this captivating tale! Please hurry and start a new one!

It was very good and i was soo happy with the length of the chapter. :D Its good to have the end so good lols. The las line where u say bound to my mate was also great. Keep doing this awesome work.

I absolutely loved it. I can't wait for your next tale.

Man I really liked reading all of your chapters. Very entertaining story.

an awesome addition. Unfortunately it contains my least favourite words... "The End."

In response to those, then, I have only one thing to say:

I. Need. More.

I stumbled on your story months ago and quickly became hooked. You are an amazing writer and I'm upset that this story has come to an end. You are one of my favorite authors on this site and I can't wait to read your next story.

Like everyone else I am at a loss now! Since chapter one I have been checking daily for more of this wonderful story and am absolutely in love with Joel and Elizabeth and can't believe there will be no more chapters to check for. Sigh please do a sequel! I love the day to day life of the pack and there are so many stories left to be told not the least of which is a few cubs for our couple and would love to see Lucus and June have cubs he would make a great dad to. Please we all need more! I feel lost without my pack to read about!!

DW fan always

Once I found this series I checked back almost daily to see when the next installment would be posted. You have an amazing talent!

Seriously...you need to write more! This was amazing! I'm completely addicted to this! Even if you don't continue the same story with the same people...I need more! Truly incredible!

P.S. An epilogue would be lovely though. ;)

keep it up! your stories are superb!