by Esclava
Oh my goodness, this story was amazing!! Beautifully told with delicious details.
Well very done story of a first meeting Esclava.
BTW, I have a lock pick set and the skill to use it on those 10 locks lil one.
Mstr. PhoenixPrime
Excellent scene, but not much of a story, as there was no conflict at all. Very hot sex scene, but I expect more story . . . even from my porn. And this was well-written enough that it should qualify as erotica, not porn. Very good first piece.
Excellent, but still fantasy. Not too much character development but the physical descriptions were fascinating.
I thought the scene was raw and delicious. My cup of tea. I liked the way you conveyed the girl's instinctual as well as almost uncontrollable desire for him. The struggle between need and want till her sucumbing to both.
Bravo. Well done.
I like this, but haven't seen the continuation of the weekend. Please write some more - thanks!
I am Esclava working to get my login back. Life took a significant turn and after surviving a catastrophic stroke, I have begun writing the continuation if the weekend and more. I'm back - see you soon!