All Comments on 'Bound Without Restraints'

by Esclava

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Lloyd2004Lloyd2004over 19 years ago
Very good!

Like your story, real good fucking , well told with atmosphere.

A's Sweet BabyA's Sweet Babyover 19 years ago
Amazing!

Oh my goodness, this story was amazing!! Beautifully told with delicious details.

PhoenixPrime01PhoenixPrime01over 19 years ago
Very Big Smile*

Well very done story of a first meeting Esclava.

BTW, I have a lock pick set and the skill to use it on those 10 locks lil one.

Mstr. PhoenixPrime

grinner666grinner666over 19 years ago
Good First Try

Excellent scene, but not much of a story, as there was no conflict at all. Very hot sex scene, but I expect more story . . . even from my porn. And this was well-written enough that it should qualify as erotica, not porn. Very good first piece.

Rad'lRad'labout 19 years ago
Good sory

Excellent, but still fantasy. Not too much character development but the physical descriptions were fascinating.

Joe SchmoeJoe Schmoeover 18 years ago
Slaves..bless them all

I thought the scene was raw and delicious. My cup of tea. I liked the way you conveyed the girl's instinctual as well as almost uncontrollable desire for him. The struggle between need and want till her sucumbing to both.

Bravo. Well done.

RJMastersRJMastersover 18 years ago
Looks*

Nicely done. Warm grinz.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Where have you been?

I like this, but haven't seen the continuation of the weekend. Please write some more - thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I am returning!

I am Esclava working to get my login back. Life took a significant turn and after surviving a catastrophic stroke, I have begun writing the continuation if the weekend and more. I'm back - see you soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Yes, my dreams! I'd love this!

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