All Comments on 'Bows and Hunters'

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lil_elvislil_elvisover 18 years ago
Perplexed

Not sure what to make of it all, still thinking. That alone made it worth reading.

MatadoreMatadoreover 18 years ago
Nicely done

As a Hunter, I know that writing humor is the most difficult thing so it demands my respect. When it is as fine as this, giving respect is easy to do. My forehead is on the floor to you my gifted colleague!

Please continue to post, it is needed.

BBH

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Well now, is there a flaw?

The hunter kisses just the string before the release. In fact, he pushes the ‘bow’ away from his body...lol

Good story though.

My best wishes

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
My humble apologises

My scoring below, of course, should be 100%

I overlooked moving from the default.

beaudazzlerbeaudazzlerover 18 years ago
allegory wake up and smile

you do have a fascinating creative process,love the way your mind works,delineation/definition maybe needs a little more work but the bones are wonderful.

thankyou

phillyinjunphillyinjunalmost 18 years ago
Very creative

I love your style. Very well done.

If there is one criticism it is that there is a lot of material there and I kept feeling that I jumping from one perspective to another. Maybe you could elaborate one (type of hunters) and drop others. Or make the story longer?

Still, it is one of the best pieces of writing I have read.

SamuelxSamuelxover 17 years ago
Outstanding work !

I like the way you think !

ninefe2dgninefe2dgalmost 17 years ago
Wonderful...

started with smirks and eye rolling, ended with guffawing and lots of nodding! Once I was tracking with you (my shortcoming not yours!), I was thoroughly entertained, thanks!

Joe WordsworthJoe Wordsworthover 16 years ago
Yeah

That was pretty funny actuallly--took a while to get going, but really good. Good job.

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