All Comments on 'Breaking Ann Ch. 01'

I can't wait to read what happens next;please don't wait too long.

Hope this is the start of what will be many chapters detailing Ann's submission. I would greatly enjoy it too if Ann threatened her dommes, leaving them no choice but to call several like-minded friends from Jim and Linda's swing club, and to finally indulge their desire for a Dolcett girl. The image of Ann writhing over a firepit is only slightly more enticing than the image of her strapped to the torture table. Keep writing!

Your first submission leaves you with a problem - how do you beat it? Superb sory, and I look forward to part 2

I wish I could give you a 6 or a 7 or a 10.

Please don't ever stop writing!

Good very good... would have liked to have seen more struggle from the cold frigid wife, but hey... id like to see PT 2 of this story thats for sure!

This is a stupid story that was obviously written by a talentless piece of crap.

No woman wants or needs to be broken.