All Comments on 'Breaking Down'

...but, "Sipping my wine, I took in the decorum." will do. "Decorum"?????

You know, quite a while back now, they invented this thing called a Dictionary - it's a really good read!

Why was this crappy motel full? What did we do with the broke down car? We're old enough to buy wine but unable to see where this is leading? Too many holes.

I don't like to rub it in, but this is the "whoopsie, all my clothes have just fallen off, let's just fuck whoever's next to me" variety.

that girls like shit hole sex. And also would understand how one little bit of shit bacteria anywhere near a vagina causes vaginitis--

Like he rest of the peep said, this one was not well-thought out, did have too many holes, literally ;).

And I think thats what you tried to achieve here. This story was only intended for quick get of, and it achieved it. At least It got me, I dont care for others. Thanks Sylvir.

I've been looking for tis story for a while after I got it on the random story thing. I love the line "do i make you randy, Randy?" That stuck with me and made me google it repeatedly until I found the story. I have a lot of stories I love on this site and in actual books, but this takes the cake for me. I'm not entirely sure why, but I can say this is my favourite story ever. Bravo!

*this

Lol that's a funny word... good story tho