All Comments on 'Breaking Jane Ch. 04'

I wanna break this Dom's fucking neck...she said fucking NO...anything after that no matter how you try to word it is rape, molestation, and coercement.

God I hate fucking Doms

He's got shares in BP & Obama's gonna toast the company....

She wants him it's obvious!! She didn't say no. She just needs convincing.

If you don't like Dom's you shouldn't read this story it's gonna get much more intense.

These one page wonders are getting very frustrating! We want more and as fast as possible!

Clearly this is a BDSM story and if you hate Doms maybe you need to find a different story?

Well done Lizzie! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Is there no more to this story, FOR REAL you left it hanging

Will you be posting another chapter soon?

I check almost every week to see if you have posted something. Plllleeeeeaaazsssee continue the story! I absolutely love it and where its going.

It's been over a year now, and still no word. This story is a favourite of mine and it would be a shame not to see it continue. Please leave a comment or better still submit chapter 5. :)

There's no follow up. I think the rest can be guessed and is less interesting. The mindgames have been played. like a rapid chess game, a bit too fast, but a full game nevertheless.