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All Comments on 'Bree at the Mall'

by MLabonte

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Dot_May_NipDot_May_Nipover 11 years ago
Interesting writing style

A little short, but nice imagery. The style, one sentence paragraphs, terse and to the point, make for a sense of urgency. Or desire.

liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago
good story and erotic

it was a little 'choppy', but I enjoyed it a lot. a few more details, and it would be four star.

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