All Comments on 'Brian and Kara Finally Getting Laid'

And why should they not have a bit of fun,I did loads of times with my lovely sister playing docters and nurses under the dining room table,the first time it went in her I thought I had lost my dick;oh those lovely days of innocence lost

It's a Good beginning. Having already read the seqeuls, I think you should put it together and try getting it published into a book. It's certainly good enough.

XYZ

Great stories, but I think you should do a bit of editing of the titles so the order is clearer.