All Comments on 'Brianna'

this was an amazing story - very sensual and soft and me feel like I was there. you did an excellent job.

One of the best I have ever read!

really well written, drew me in, very sexy! thanks

The end made a fine capper to a sizzling story…but a party wants to see our girl make love to her little sister. (You can have Brianna and sis's girl join them later on.) Keep up the orgasmic work!

That was honestly one of the hottest, most excellent stories i've read on this site. The build-up was absolute perfection, not too slow but not too fast either. Bravo.

One of the best stories on this site. I really enjoyed reading it & I hope you will write another chapter or two to this story soon.

You have introduced balance between romance and lust in a very special way. Please keep your writing coming. On and on.

Please keep up the great work! I agree with another comment. I would love to see the main character and her sister get together! I think it would be really hot and then it could be a foursome later on with Brianna and the sister's gf! I hope there will be another/more chapter(s) for this story (at least one more chapter, please)!

You're really good, and this story definitely proves it!!

A real hot horny first story love the writing every bit as much as the story do keep them cumming you do have that some thing that turns the story in to real life.

I've read this at least ten times! I thought it was so hot and so realistic. You inspired me to try to seduce my best friend and she was totally into it! We spent literally four hours doing everything to each other until we were finally to exhausted to continue. It was the best sex ever! We're both hooked on girl-girl action and totally in love with each other. Thank you so much!

Just lovely! I enjoyed it very much. :)

The best combination!

I thought that this was one of the best erotica stories I have ever read. You put in so much detail and fanasé that that I PERSONALLY orgasmed twice. You really have outdone yourself chickie. Great job! :)

This was so beautifully written. By telling us what's going on inside the heads of the characters, their doubts and desires, they come to life. You also are generous telling us the effect, on all five senses, these girls have on each other. Thank you so much for a beautiful, sweet, tender, highly erotic, and very believable love story. Your writing is the best I've read on this site.

Amazing story ! and, amazingly well-told ! ... Wish we all could have experienced friends like these. You made them real. Thank you !

Well written And a lot of fun! Great job Dr X aka directorx!

Another great story. So much so I went to your bio page to see what other stories you've written, 12 but nothing since 2009/10 with the exception of your recent post of Steps to Licking Pussy 5 & 6. You have a way of drawing readers into your stories to the point, I at least, superimpose myself into the characters, or at the very least, I fill like I have a front row seat to the action. I do believe that's the mark of a good writer. I guess a welcome back is in order and I hope all the praise and encouragement you've received from all the Literotica readers will motivate you to continue to share your talent with the world. Thank you

Re-read every month or so. Will you write more stories though?