All Comments on 'Brides'

this is a great beginning,do you have future chapters planned for this?

Scary story, reasonable premise, imaginative writing. But please get another pair of eyes to review your work, to help with spelling, homophones, and mis-applied words. A good editor can do a world of good, reducing distracting errors and improving readability.

Pretty good story. Good writing and descriptions. Got to love a sexy vampire story.