All Comments on 'Bridesmaids Are Easy Ch. 02'

I will keep an eye out for ch. 3. Hope you get it out soon, realy enjoyed this story. I am checking out your other storys as soon as I get done here. Thank you for the great story.

I just read Bridesmaids Are Easy both recently! You should and hope you do continue with theis serious especially since CV is going to NY!

With all the grammar errors, misspelled words, and just bad writing, this story did not deserve the score of 1 I gave it.

You use too many commas. Stop splitting compound words apart. Get an editor. If you already have one, get a second one because the first one isn't doing you justice. Soooo many grammatical errors, misspelling, missing words, wrong use of words ("breath" vs "breathe"). Stop using the term "one eye monster". It just sounds childish. I enjoy the scenario but, wow, your writing needs a lot of help. No rating from me.

What Whirling Dervish said. You need an editor, and you need to learn to proofread. Nothing wrong with your plotting, but exciting as your story is, the clumsy mistakes are driving your readers mad.