All Comments on 'Britney Story'

Loved how you combined real life details with fantasy, that makes for one real hot story and one real aroused reader

very nicely writen

Well written, with plenty of action - but not rushed, which is good.

Great work, and I'd definately be interested in seeing that sequel you mentioned if you get it written.

Loved your story, but I don't understand why Britney was not given the honor of deflowering Rich/Rachel.

Though you had some misused words, except instead of accept and such, it was well written, though I too was hoping Britney would take his cherry, I liked the story very much. The only issue I see with a sequel would be that you wrapped up pretty officially the Britney segment of the saga if there continues to be one. There's no conflict if you decide to continue solely on the basis of the Rachel storyline, though admittedly that's not my fancy. I think you should continue to write, but I would be more interested in a different storyline.