All Comments on 'Broken Inside Ch. 01'

It was a good start, is there more written? Please don't be like the majority of new writers and even ones who have been here for ages and leave the readers waiting for months on end for an update, especially with only one chapter posted, I know I have read many first chapters and only story of many new writers over a year ago and got tired of waiting for an update that's 'coming soon'

This is going in the right direction can't wait to read. More

..this is your "first shot at writing." So well done. Keep on rolling. You have a great premise and a concise, captivating way of expressing yourself. I am looking forward to the rest.

--LDM, California

I really hope you've written more for this story as I really like your first chapter.

I am sure many more people than me are awaiting more of this story. I read it back in January when you posted it, and favorited it so I could keep track of when you posted again. If you need inspiration just know that your readers loved it and want more. I feel like I just ate one potato chip and someone took away the bag.

Ever going to continue?

Are you another of the many authors on here that don't finish their stories?

Yet another one that left us hanging and won't even answer a simple question of when it will be continued!