All Comments on 'Brother Cucks Brother: Or Does He?'

You choose to read a Loving Wives story on a porn site and then complain when a woman screws someone other than her husband. Calling her a slut while puritanically calling out the rape! Yes, of course the rape scene is unpleasant and a bad thing to have done. But not out of place in the context of the story. I found the story quite inventive and rather funny. Marisa and Caitlin in particular were great characters.

she fucking behind her husband cheating slut How can you make a equal like that! that's not Fair ending, need like a throw this slut out Of the house.

redfoxx15 nailed it. Well said.

This is a verrrry well told story, of some mostly good people doing some verrrry naughty things. And, given the events they were faced with, I think the plan has a decent chance of succeeding.

Given Dave’s deep-seated inferiority complex caused by his treatment by family, his wife’s blatant sexcapades with his brother can have no good ending.

Redfox has said all that need be said. Personally, I really have problems with ppl moralizing after reading porn stories. But then, it takes all kinds...

I love your stories I came twice on my fingers from them. I squirted for you.

Please come back and add to the wild and wonderful story

5 pages of ppffffhhhhttt.

Fortuitous that Adam could not have kids - do we really need guys like him populating the gene pool …….

I didn't like the end

Sequel please

Mixed emotions on this one.

Story was very, very hot, but I’m not happy with the wife swapping.

I can’t see a ‘happy ever after’ long term.

Bill S.

I would have loved to read about the actual bareboat fun

It would have been better if the timeline extended to the end of the cruise. Hearing the fantasized 'plans' detracts a bit.

Boy you really have a thing for writing stories were one man impregnates another man's wife.

Cheating saves the marriages ... LOL ... you're a twisted dude!

I too would have liked to have seen the story extended to the boat trip, but I will say that I don't find it a fatal omission. Characterization was good, the logical progression was no less than what one would expect in an erotic fantasy, and the story flow was very good. I see this as a 4.5-star work, but since I can't give that, I'm pushed up to 5 stars. (I would have liked to see more from Bombaclot in explanation for their thinking that this is not a "well-written story". Great, maybe not, but a very abbreviated comment all the same.)

I liked every story Scouries wrote !! Your stories are long enough to keep me reading for awhile. Each story !! More more please

Nope, once he raped her I was done. This should be tagged as nonconsent and rape.

One of my favorite stories. Thanks for providing this to us.

without last Adam joining, it would be so good. Sorry, not my type

A second story would be interesting.

Erotic A÷

Very entertaining and erotic! I love the hot Cuban character and the contrast with the Anglos. I will say there is a pretty strong chance that this whole arrangement goes sideways in the future and everyone ends up hurt

Wow! That was a great story on many levels! Thank you!

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Caitlyn, Dave and Marissa are all straight up ASSHOLES - keeping poor Adam in the dark about Dave RAPING Caitlyn and then Marissa concocting some cockamamie scheme to have Adam have sex with her.

-666/10!!!!!