All Comments on 'Brother, My Brother Ch. 04'

Very enjoyable. I enjoy the loving relation between brother and sister.

I had to give a chuckle at Liam's last statment... i would have killed him!

The bigger, what a thing to say. LOL!!!!!

A shame this story had to end l was really getting into it

Scores 5/5

Well done, and this was either the second or third reading. Good grammar and well edited. The finish is perfect. The only thing left is Liam moving to Scotland permanently, and probably finding someone to quietly marry them. Don't know what the laws in Scotland are, but their last name is legally the same, so their daughter has it. More kids, same thing so really married or not, they can co-habitat until death do they part. Good job. Keep writing.

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