All Comments on 'Brother Sister Ch. 01'

Love the style, love the content, can't wait to read more from you!

Took a long while to read, but I suppose it was worth it.

Can't wait for Chapter 2 to cum out. Great story.

The start was great. I love the way you based this fatasy in reallty it was fun. The sluty parts were not great for me but it did send me to bed for the night. i think i would like less friends and more brother. Lucky fir me you are on chap 9 more reading for me ;)

How did he turn the taps on with his injuries?

Great Job, Ignore the critics.....

Bec had errr Josh (boyfriend), Matt (brother), George (friend of a friend), John (guy who wants to be friends), Stevie (some guy out in the parking lot), Nick (some guy), Paul (just some dude), Peter (another dude, Luke (a perfect stranger), Lauren (was that a girl or a boy?), Skinky (a big brother?), Pinkey (Snoop Doog's side kick?), Lenny (some dumb character from a Steibeck novel),,,, err who else?

Nikki, you always have a hot tale to tell and this time you really outdid your usual self. Thanks for your work and for posting some of the best stories I've read on this site or others.

Great story! When I saw there were 5 pages, I though it was too much. When I got to the end, I am now waiting for a Chapter 2! Very enjoyable to read! You have something most don`t, A Plot to your story!

Brilliant story there, love how it built up between the siblings before they finally started to fool around. Her being a bit slutty with a few friends is not something I normally like but you played it just right and it was great. Well written and great style!

Ignore anyone complaining about little errors. Yes you made a mix up with the names at one point but it was obvious who was meant to be where and anyone that lets that distract from a great story just needs to get over it.

Very very good story.. could you add some pity fuck with stranger or someone she barely knew or just met? I bookmarked you already, eagerly waiting for chapter 2. - Apollo

I also noticed a the character mix-ups--a couple of times, Matt suddenly became Josh, which briefly confused me. But aside from that, it was an incredibly hot, well-written story. Really, I couldn't help but thinking that the incest story I just finished writing was kinda inferior to this one. Kudos to you!

A great hot story!

Its a pity you didnt bother to proof read this story. In chapter 2 you have your characters mixed up in the video shop. ie the brother was at home and the boyfriend was at the video shop.