All Comments on 'Brotherly Discovery'

by snerpyloo

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
sequal?

Need a second

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Please write a part two

chesthairslavechesthairslavealmost 11 years ago
BROTHERLY GAY INCEST: "I love you John." "I love you, too, Mike."

I liked that Mike and John spoke about gay feelings. I also liked the deep respect and love that they expressed towards each other. Sexual exploration between two brothers seems to be more common than I once thought. I just wish that John being 27 had given Mike only 18 a bit more time to think about their discussion before John made the first move. I thought the characters and story were very believable. The story had a nice pacing. Should you want to, the characters warrant at least a second chapter.

mysealtheeclipsemysealtheeclipsealmost 11 years ago
More Please

reminds me of me and my brother when i was 16 and he was 17.

gomaco9gomaco9almost 11 years ago
Cousins too

Reminds me of my cousin and myself many years ago. We were teens and exploring as young men do. It came down to a mutual JO session and progressed to blow jobs. That was fifty some years ago and we still did each other when we had the chance up until he passed way. Never had much contact with other men, just him. I guess we loved each other in a way that most family members do not. I feel no sorrow about what we did, just pleasure.

BrownEyedChickBrownEyedChickalmost 11 years ago
Hot!

Just like it said in the story, It's forbidden love, but it feels so right and I shouldn't be thinking this because I have two brothers, but the story was hot.

newbyat61husker1951newbyat61husker1951almost 11 years ago
sexy

Wow, so sexy and heart warming. To share that kind of love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loving brothers

Mike and John confess their love to each other so tenderly. Mike rubs John's chest hair and shows how much his brother's attention and affection mean to him. Write more!

snerpyloosnerpylooover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for all the nice comments, guys. I am in the process of writing a part II that I hope will be as hot as this one. It may take a while, as I don't have much free time to write, but I will post it as soon as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Awesome

Please write more. I'd love to see a romance between them, or at least more sexual acts. This makes me wanna read some NorIce (Norway x Iceland).

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great story

beautiful story n very sweet n tasteful yet very sexy

mal32mal32over 9 years ago
more please

Please write more about these brothers, you are so good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
brothers

Yes this is a great story, there should b e other stories to follow this one, touching sucking each others cock (s) got me hard very fast my cock loved every bit of the stories.

One thing please keep the stories ( oral only ).

Waiting for a straight young male to suck me off !!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I don't buy for a second...

That everyone has a little bit of gayness in them, what complete and utter bullshit. Its like saying everyone has a little bit of hetero in them and women do NOTHING for me. I've had them fondling me, kissing me, naked in my bed and I stayed as limp as a dick could be. They have never even caused a wiggle, never any desire for them, no attraction to them. It sounds like the author swings both ways too a point and stupidly puts everyone in the same bubble like a goddamn moron. Don't know why that bugged me so much, I guess I don't like reading stupid obviously false shit stated as fact, subliminally or outright.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Curious

My step brother and I shared a room and bunk beds but weren't in love and all kissy passionate like the dudes in this story, but we sexually explored each other after he was curious about our daily morning erections in a show-me-yours-I'll-show-you-mine scenario. There we stood facing each other, our erect raging hard boners bobbing openly pointing upward. I let him touch and squeeze my throbbing penis while I squeezed his, then we sucked each other! This became a regular practice for us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More please.

I think it's a good share between brothers. To the comment about everyone having a little grayish tendencies in this is not necessarily wrong. I believe people may deny the fact that they may have curiosities about anything sexual. Whether they are brave enough to act on those feelings is totally an individual act. That's why there are so many closet LGBTQ.

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