All Comments on 'Brothers Pt. 11'

My heart is in my chest!!!! Please update soon. I need to know what happens next!

Oh god. Great chapter. Great series. Simply cannot wait for Ch. 12.

Wow! Mike and Jesse love each other, and that comes across so strongly in their lovemaking. Mike's chest hair, Jesse's devotion, their big cocks, the kissing and tender touches -- keep it up, even if you have too move them away from their dad!

maybe dad is gay too and they don't know it

Loving the story and the relationship between the brothers it feels real.. This is not a criticism more an observation you're a brill writer but you tend to overuse the word lovingly. Update soon please

The father needs to go, they could even make it self defense of abusive father, or maybe set him up being killed by a jealous husband. Either way that works.

Hey Anon (#3)

Thanks for your comment & critique. You're right, I do use that word quite often. Thanks for pointing it out, because I probably wouldn't have noticed, haha. I really do appreciate constructive criticism. I also want to assure you that there will be no father/son incest in *this* series.

I also want to thank everyone else that's commented. You guys are awesome. I am hoping to update within the week. Cheers!

~ Jack

P.S. mspervy46 you win for best comment on anything ever.

so i started this series at 1;30 last night and finished about an hour and a half later and oh my gosh it was so great!!!!! cant wait for more!!!

Please update soon

Mmm please update soon I fucking love this, my dick is tingling with every word

awesome story. update needed soon plssssssssss.

plot twist; the father joins them