All Comments on 'BTB: Alex'

Good Read.

more like a bad sunburn. TK U MLJ LV NV maybe a same bat-channel reprise mlj

If it wasn't for the witch's mother having a heart attack the wife wouldn't have found out the truth. Nice quick tale.

was there a story here

Pathetic crap

not worth reading definitely!

Where is the rest of the story.

Wrong category. Again.

At least it was short.

sounds like alot of the story still has to be written here. so far pretty good

Right category. If the non-erotic swinging and fetish willing cuckold stories can be posted here so can these.

understand someone writing this foolishness and how the great laurel let it be published it must be a slow day.

But these guys are such losers that it really is not that spell-binding.

....story, but too brusque and pale in description and texture.

Yup, it's a story. Nope, it's not very interesting, because readers have a hard time engaging with the one dimensional, shallow characters.

Might be interesting to take this somewhere, but yer gonna hafta get into the characters more and really tell a story, not just read us the headlines.......

And why shouldn't it be a cheating husband story, with a clever wife bringing the revenge to his door?

The more likely it is that Laurel will like it.

And then things got ugly for everyone. Lots of divorces. So the men got slaps on the wrist because no one puts anyone in jail for committing adultery. And and switch stuff earned them some more fines but no jail time because that's how the system rolls. So she got her divorce and nothing out of it since he had no resources and the car lot was gone. So no alimony, no child support and the few remaining assets didn't amount to anything after all his fines were paid off. So she ended up with no place to live, no money and no way to support herself and her kids. Time to move home with Mom and Dad? Alex just moved across the country and started again. A good salesman could always find a job. She lost - big time. Funny, sad little tale.

But then you pulled that caca about adultery being a felony and it was time for the old 1*

2nd verse worse than the first, TK U MLJ LV NV

Where's the "to be continued" ?????????

Not as good as Your other story. Just kind of died a quick death.

Alex got served but not arrested. He went directly to the bank and cleaned out all the accounts, including the business accounts and simply disappeared. She was stuck raising the kids with no Father and no money. What a dumb bitch. You must have thought so too since you never continued the story.

1 star

1 star - you lost my attention when you decided to mutilate the lover. Violence is never an option - no matter what they did.

⭐⭐⭐⭐ I'm interested. Foolish place to stop. As for a certain commentor (nixrox), I went back and gave this story the additional star just to cancel you out (😁😁😁😁😁). What mutilation? What violence? Now slink off to one of your other Anonymous accounts and take your revenge. 😜🖕

I’m an anonymous but unlike some commenters actually read and comment on the story. This was very enjoyable but would like some more fleshing out

Just a bit too bullet point writing for me. Liked the plot

Wow, she married an asshole because he tickled her fancy as a bad boy, then got surprised he's an asshole.

Good, but left too much hanging.