All Comments on 'Bunnygirl Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not bad.

Its a good story but I was a bit put off at how fast she forgave Cal for raping her. Seriously...any girl would have felt used, betrayed and would not trust the man that raped them. It would have been nicer if they had a strained relationship for a while and see what Cal would have done to get her trust back. Other than that its an ok story. Also, don't rush it...if you do then it takes away from the story and the characters. A great story doesn't always need sex in every chapter. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
What?

Cal rapes her and minutes after she says she loves him? Doubt it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
more

please give us the next chapter

LilBlondePuppyLilBlondePuppyabout 16 years ago
I love it

I don't care what anyone else says, I've been waiting to read more of this story and I think its absolutely fantastic. I can't wait for more.

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenover 15 years ago
Any girl might have felt betrayed but if

she truly loved him, she'd forgive him. The one thing that is bugging me, it's Look a gift horse in the mouth, not kick. If you're given a gift horse, they don't want you looking at the teeth to see how old it is, which is where that saying came from.

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