All Comments on 'Burglar'

Why did she have plasters over her eyes?

Fantasy was ruined by him being so pathetic at the end. This isn't the place for realism, he should instead have started on round two and made her like it.

Excellent story. Top notch writing with no distracting errors or typos. Great control play. Loved it. Hoping to find more by elli.

Loved it. Will read more of your submissions. Good sexual tension.

It was a great fantasy become a reality story but I do wish you went alittle longer with it, maybe how he makes his escape. It just feels like it ended too abruptly. And the band aids over her eyes kind of bother me.

i liked how this story went...her fantasy

come to life...how lucky for her.

they could be win-win for each other.

will there be more?