All Comments on 'Burned Ch. 03'

Please continue....i'm really enjoying the story

should have had him say her name

Yawn, dragged out unnecessarily.

... to get both perspectives on the relationship, but seperately This looks to be building into something really good.

Once again someone who has nothing good to say hasn't got the nerve to put their name to the comment.

Okay, now that was a lot better than chapter two. You deserve the 5/5 this time. I especially love that Leah is jealous when most readers already know that Chris was thinking about her during his orgasm. Excellent plot!