All Comments on 'Bursting Out'

by jamie

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
wow

very hot !!!

i'd love to hear more

and maybe see a photo of those wonderful tits

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Photos?

How could we see photos?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Sooooooooo hot

What a hot story, liked the way you moved on from one person to the other, always keeping it sexy and hot. Tits sound great but I would love to see that tongue. Not too many people have such a long and talented tongue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More Busting Out Pleaaaaaaaase

there has to be more of this story as its so hot please

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A connotation note

Really stellar job! This was a very enjoyable read. However, you must note that, unless you are an anglican, "priests" cannot marry. You may want to clarify your denomination or just swithch entirely to "pastor".

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
"Sexy package"

Pubes that run up the crack of your ass and a pug nose = sexy package? Return to sender.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A Monumental Page-Turner, 5-stars

Hey, you're my kind of girl. I'm a bi-female and wish I could "massage" your body, all over!!!!!!!!!!!!! By your description of your body and your looks, I'm ready to migrate to Norway. Is your sister available too?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
lesbian

i would like to see more pussy licking action

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
one of the best

absolutely loved it! great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Realy nice story i can't wait for Ch 2 i want to hear about the pastor when he really fucks her.

yukimiyukimiover 10 years ago
very natural

I'VE ONLY READ HALF AND I'M ALREADY VOTING FAVE CUZ JAMIE WRITES SO NATURALLY ESP. HER DESCRIPTION OF DAD AND SIS - MAKES ME WANT TO FUCK , AND CUDDLE , AND STROKE, CARESS, LICK HER AND DO EVERYTHING FOR A VERY LONG TIME MAKING LOVE TO HER WITH AFFECTION AND PASSION - BECAUSE THAT'S WHAT SHE INVOKES IN ME - WOW! AGAIN !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Oh Jamie!

You n I will be very happy together every day for the rest of our lives - Chris/Yukimi

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
4.5 Stars

This is the first time I attempted to rate a story Jamie. I thought I had to srlected the number of stars vs one of the stars which clearly has a number on it. I hit the first star with the intent to hit the 2nd , 3rd and 4th but as I now know it doesnt work that way. Just wanted to make sure you knew that I enjoyed it more than 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More Stories

I enjoyed your story, please continuee

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

beautiful beautiful beautiful

BaldyLocks69BaldyLocks693 months ago

I remember reading this story several years ago. I really like the changes you've made to it. It's kind of a part two or continuation of the original story without making a completely new one up. Great job!

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