All Comments on 'Business & Pleasure'

Well written , erotic description of magnetic sexual attraction between Julie and Jason, but the basic premise is rediculous. According to your story, Matt is handsome, muscular, articulate,wealthy and successlul.Julie is gorgeous, beautiful face and figure, great personality and perfect match for her husband. After writing that, you have Julie hitting on handsome Black stranger 10 minutes after they meet and blatently hitting on him. Matt, on the other hand, has to leave town, so stops and asks black stranger to keep track of his beautiful wife while he's gone. Please don't insult our intelligence . What normal husband asks a handsome stranger to keep track of a gorgeous wife? Matt can't be that dumb. 60 year old George

Bravo! I certainly hope you make future contributions to this site. This is probably the best story that I have the good fortune to read on this site!!!

Quite a good piece of work. I like they way he was working the scenarios in his mind when he first met her, and if he thought she was playing him. Was let down a bit by Matt just happening to ask him to "look after his wife". Good start and great ending.

This was a very hot story! I can related to Jason. I once got out of my car to go into the biulding where I work, and saw the most beautiful women I have ever seen. I wasn't as lucky as Jason, but that girl messed up my mind for a couple of days...I couldn't stop thinking about her!!! Will there be a part two?

Thanks!

This story made me so hot, you have to continue it, i don't know how but you have to. i can relate to the ENTIRE story. Good job on the whole thing, and like i said CONTINUE!!!

The tempo was very good, not rushed or crude.....we should all be so lucky..

wow, our education system has failed you.

hope husband finds out and dumps her

Very well put together, except for some bad spelling and grammar mistakes! Otherwise, this is a story that can run and run!

LOVE this story and several sections of the additional parts. Great writing, just needs some editing and a better flow of the story line.

I think it could all be put together into one nice story, and make it a consensual sharing of the wife.

Because...it really seemed like that's what it was going to be.

More fitting to a swinger, Stag/Vixen, wife sharing type of story. Leave all the seduction and hot sex parts in and take out the impregnation hints, the infidelity and fall out at the end and reconciliation at the very end.

Love the detail that the author used to describe everything, and the art of seduction and sensual feelings.

Reality check - Who leaves their drop-dead gorgeous young wife with another man for a day. A stranger, for one, and a man who is obviously a superior sexual specimen, so to speak.

And thinks that they aren't going to have sex? Please!