All Comments on 'Business Trip'

A well written story that I really enjoyed. There were a few grammar issues and I have a pet peeve about giving out numbers to describe a character but I hope to read more from you.

Very good and looking for more from you and I read a story to enjoy and not to complain of things like a lot of people do on here. They must feel good being perfect in a perfect world.!! Got you a '5' & a 100 in my humble opinion.! Thanks.