All Comments on 'But She Is Straight?'

This is nit-picking, I appreciate. But there is no 'London University' and as a Londoner that was actually quite jarring to read. It would have taken 1 minute of Googling to have found and used the correct name for a university.

I did Google it, my friend. And I'm applying for said uni!

University of London: Home

www.lon.ac.uk/

The University of London was founded 175 years ago and is the largest University in the United Kingdom

Will you make this a series or just a single story?

I liked it.

HI,

Good draft. Please slow it down and take time to develop the scenes and transitions. Also, please get an editor. Otherwise, keep writing

Although the story reached its end! It has more there, I was clearly entertained.

I'm scoring it with 5 🌟's + another 5 on merit. Good Luck on your next piece.

Think about what you come up with for a pt2.

'That was fantastic. I always wondered what brought girls together. I really enjoyed the battle of straight girls realize they aren't so straight as they believed. Yet I've wondered what would happen when two really and truly straight girls found a love with each other.