by lesbian96
'That was fantastic. I always wondered what brought girls together. I really enjoyed the battle of straight girls realize they aren't so straight as they believed. Yet I've wondered what would happen when two really and truly straight girls found a love with each other.
Although the story reached its end! It has more there, I was clearly entertained.
I'm scoring it with 5 🌟's + another 5 on merit. Good Luck on your next piece.
Think about what you come up with for a pt2.
HI,
Good draft. Please slow it down and take time to develop the scenes and transitions. Also, please get an editor. Otherwise, keep writing
Will you make this a series or just a single story?
I liked it.
I did Google it, my friend. And I'm applying for said uni!
University of London: Home
www.lon.ac.uk/
The University of London was founded 175 years ago and is the largest University in the United Kingdom
This is nit-picking, I appreciate. But there is no 'London University' and as a Londoner that was actually quite jarring to read. It would have taken 1 minute of Googling to have found and used the correct name for a university.